DUDE, that can't be all of it. I still don't know what the whole button thing means! Like in your other stories, I really enjoyed your writing on this and all the characters in general. :D

I realli like how you phrase certain situations. And I love how you characterized the three of them. It seems natural. Everything was slow and steady; not too rushed. The development between them was very fundamental and I think you portrayed it really well.

I think this was great description and characterization-wise, but it didn't really seem anchored thematically.

Some of the scenes were really great, but they didn't really seem to interact with the others in a way I related to, I guess.

This was an interesting pairing to take on. I really like the way you tied all three of them together, not just one to the other but actually inside each head and their view of the other two. If that makes sense. TezuFujiRyo is hard to get right, but I think you did a great job.
And Tezuka with a 'Kiss Me' sign on his back? Priceless.