yay they have been saved! nice ending to the chapter!!
cant wait to read the recovery chapter!!

A very nice story. You have good ideas and a fantastic grasp of English. Using a native English speaker as a beta would clean and tighten up the story. The end was a bit abrupt, and some questions unanswered, but I that leaves room for sequels. A great first story. Keep going.

Great job. So glad everyone got ok. Yeah Dr. Weir for sending a rescue!

Way to up the tension. Great job!

Cliffie! No! Good way to hook readers though- great job. Eager for more

Evil cliffie - no! Another great chapter. Don't leave me hanging too long! well done! :)

Ack, Shep is separated from the team. Sounds like set up for some good whump!

Interesting.

Only wait one day for rescue. Sounds like it should be easy. Wonder what you are going to do to them next!

I'm enjoying this, and I liked the dialogue, particularly McKay's. I look forward to more. :)

yay...some relief for the team there at the end...poor team freezing to death, and little teyla aint going to last if u keep putting her through this! Bring on the next chapter!!

poor teyla... :S

Now, very calmly tell me... when will there be shep whump...?

lol

x-x-x bye x-x-x

ps: travelers is a whump ep in season 4 pparantly - it's on gateworld, it's apparanly: 'a gift for all those in the shep whump persuasion'.

i cant wait hehe xD

Unfortunately, I'm english and i live in england so... ill have to watch on youtube/alluc. Gahness..

ahem...

More please! The poor team.

Nice chapter. Moved the story well, and the character's voices are true to form. Keep up the good work.

oh poor team!! But yay!! team whump fic!! excellently exciting and interesting!! please update soon!