I loved this story so, so very much. The mood is just perfect... druken Kakuzu, paying Hidan for sex in a chapel... it's so sexy, but it also makes you think and it's another very interesting take on the characters. Genius. I think I'm addicted to your KakuHidan, I do hope you keep writing about them.

Oh, wow.

" and there, there in the lowering of his voice is the influence of the alcohol."

I really like that line.

That is most definitely how i could imagine Kakuzu acting after having to much to drink - I bet he can't hold his liquor, either. They'll wake up tomorrow with terrible hangovers and Kakuzu will regret it for as long as he lives. Of course, Hidan will be embarrassed but wouldn't let it show, and he'd never let Kakuzu live it down that he paid him for sex.

Wow, there are so many different ways I can make of the story
Each of them better than the last
The mood is wonderful and the atmoshere makes me want to read it just so I can keep the picture in my head
Kakuzu and Hidan are wonderful, and although I couldn't see them acting like this in the manga, they seem perfectly incharacter
I hope you write more KakuHida in the future!

beautifully written! I love the way you write these two.

That was so... Interesting.

Wow.

Well done. n.n

-faves-

Well, if yaoi is a sin, then I'm a very sinful animal. :)

Why would Mary weep if she was going to be first-hand witness to a lemon? I think even the mother of God could appreciate that. (I'm not going to hell for that comment, am I?) Well, great story. Mush loves. :)

Don't know why but that 'payment' bit, Kakuzu giving Hidan the coin, made me laugh. I really like this, I think it's your discription of the altar Kakuzu chose to lay against that gives this story so much power.
By and bye I love that mental image, of Kakuzu sitting against one of those statues of The Mother.

Cool, the virgin started crying, wait...ha ha, I wonder if there's going to an equivalent to Mexico in Naruto. But wouldn't that be like haveing the Sound village and the Akisauke(argh!! I can't spell) combined.