skipped ahead from the end of chapter one to the most interesting chapter title. didnt enjoy what i found; I know this is supposed to be funny but the humor you're using puts me right out of the story. i want a story that captivates me...no points at me. Axel and Riku are so ooc that i cant imagine them saying any of the things they did in this chapter. I will not be reading any more of this. Good luck with your writing in the future.

why the hell were they so worried about seeing zack he was so nice to them

Huzzah! This story is made of epic win and awesome sauce! Friggin' sweet job dude! XD
HorsesRain

That's hilarious! I love this!

i think people are right on here. you should continue. not my decision but think about it ok. i like it alot.

well...*dies*
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i discontinued all of my stories once...but there were people who liked it. you should continue. but that's not my choice to decide.

SAME THING FOR THIS ONE. D: you have to update... you don't understand.. some of us ned to know how it's gonna work out! and i want to read some more axel+roxas from you. so please, please PLEASEPLEASE finish this story too! i don't think they suck. :(

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If you stop this story I'm going to cry. I'll revolt against you and I'll get your home adress and send you meanie things...

*snifle* YOU CAN'T STOP!

;_; I want to read more of this!

wait isn't that song Sanctuary?

O.o... how could you.. do this to me? you ended it on a cliffhanger?? could'nt you write one more chapter? please?! and your writing style is AWSOME! AWSOME I TELL YOU! i cracked up at every line, and your style is clever and witty and freakin' awsome!
~kitty

That's great! But I don't think your stories suck. I think your stories are HILARIOUS! I LOVE them! But its still nice that your starting a new story since I'll write that really, really well like all the others you did. But...you're not gonna stop writing this one are you? Cuz I'd DIE if you did! ! !

Shia

oh my.. this story is insane! even when you write you sound crazy!! haha, it's really funny though, and i love fucshia. roxy's a wimp though. and reno's super funny. write the next part super speed! (chunk up the deuce, haha) :D

OMG It's been forever since I've reviwed! :O -gasps- I'lltry to make two in a night! :D (like little babies ^_^ sora babies that is xD)
Okay first off as usual I LoVeD this chapter! :D Seriously it was like a little gift of gay joy. xD I'm not making much sense am I? lol We'll let's begin :D
First off
ZOMFG YOU USED MY IDEA! I was seriousy staring at the computer screen for 5 minutes havinga party in my head cuz i was so excited.:D
2.) rofl bottom of his shit. xD
3.)LOL :anime-fell" i could so imagine him doing that to with his eyes all big and white and his mouth all wide xD
3.)"iternal battle time" lol you make it sound like it's something that happens everyday xDD
4.)lol sora ISH stupid >:)
5.) OMFG I LOVE MADAM FUSHIA SINGING! That was so random, what a comic relief! mhm purple gay boy all the way! we need a video with her singing that xD
6.)i love the "lalalalalala WHORE!" i used it as a subject in one of my bulletins ^_^
7.)yay for random singing about rabbits lol
8.) dude imma KILL that inner sora for doubting riku with the same pack of wolves that killed inner kairi xD i love those wolves

ditch kairi and go to riku! XD hehehe Update soon!

Oh...My...Motherfuckin' GOD! BEST STORY I EVER READ!(in kingdom hearts at least) UPDATE SOON! Or else I'll kill you BITCH! -coughs- Ahem, yeah... got too excited.