I know I told you this already, but, dude, this is good! The plot (even though it was taken partly from the movie) is captivating, the characters are likable, and you crave for more at the end of each chapter. You need more of it! Please make this a top priority in your spare time!

I really like how you describe the airport,Lilo and her sister(what they were wearing).This whole chapter is told by Kyle and so the reader only knows what Kyle is thinking.The writer used parenthesis in the story which added information for the reader to undestand and this is really helpful. The diction throughout the story is faily simple so it is really easy to understand every detail.Maybe the writer can add more inner thoughts of Kyle and needs more subtext instead of telling the reader everything

Nice fic, but what about Lilo and her interaction with Stitch?

As for Kingdome Hearts 2, I was upset about the limited cut-scene time as well. But the Sephrioth fight made up for it.

I swear it's like an instant adrenalin rush thinking about how I ACTUALLY BEAT HIM!

Sorry, geeked out there.

Please update soon.

Later Days!!
Isumo1489