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Reviews for: Violent Wiggles
pcp4202002
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
I can just picture this happening after populer lol. good job
Scarlett Dahlin
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
“Chase The Roommate With The Bed Sheets”, “How Many People Can You Wake Up (verbal and door-knocking renditions)”,
KaraLee713
2008-05-12 . chapter 1
So, here I sit, with four of your stories open in different windows in front of me (O Holy Night, Sure Enough, Rooming Capacity, and of course, Violent Wiggles) I was debating with myself, as I read more and more of your work, whether I should review them individually, end up saying the same thing over and over, and sound like a blithering idiot, OR review several at once... and still end up sounding like a blithering idiot. I opted to save myself some time, (I'm rather lazy :p) and do an en masse review.

Ok, so, that massive explanation out of the way, here goes:

O Holy Night: Awesome, poignant, wonderful characterizations, I loved it!

Sure Enough: Angsty, sweet, totally perfect, ditto on the "loved it" part.

Rooming Capacity: Who doesn't love fluff? Not me, that's for sure. :) The two of them are adorable together, and I love the way you write them.

Violent Wiggles: My favorite I think (though it's hard to pick one). Again, they are adorable, and despite any "flatness" in using the challenge words, I LOVED IT.

See? Even with my best efforts I just repeat myself (it's really the only coherent thought that comes to mind anyway) so aren't you glad you got one, thoughtful and (forcibly) varied review for four stories, rather than four identical reviews? (which I'm sure, had I written them in the moment, would've read something like this: GAH! Love, love, love. Awesome! YAY Gelphie!)

So, I appreciate you putting up with this ridiculous review (not that you have much choice) and as a side note, I'd like to mention that I also really enjoy your disclaimers and author's notes. Your work has made for a truly enjoyable evening, and I thank you! :)
OtakuGamerGirl
2007-10-08 . chapter 1
I actually liked this story, you did a good job with the characterizations, and you managed to make Glinda smart and still peppy.
Ayumu Kasuga
2007-10-05 . chapter 1
HURRAH FOR GELPHIE. :D

and that is all I shall say for the matter, other than it has melted me into happy sparkly pink goo. somewhat. somebody conjure a jar, quick.

XD;
LostOzian
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
No no, praying would be a very difficult thing without your Luriane trinket. It's fine there were two. How do the Ozians know about Hawaii? Maybe another Lost wanderer of long ago told them! That must be it...Keep reading and writing! -LostOzian
Lady Rainbows
2007-03-16 . chapter 1
hahahaha. completely loved this! "face my fear of being smart"- classic.
Kennedy Leigh Morgan
2007-03-13 . chapter 1
Oh my heck that was hysterical! I expected humor and maybe even parody but I didn't expect it to be smart too! This is the first story in a long time that I have laughed nearly the whole way through. And yet there were more serious parts as well of course, but you transitioned into and out of them perfectly. Nothing felt forced. The jokes, the characters, the imagery all of them were great. I particularly loved Elphaba's projections on Morrible and the suggestion of doorbell ditching (or the dorm room/ozian version anyway :D) This was fabulous!
ChocolatStar
2007-03-07 . chapter 1
Hey. You know I've been reading, purely by chance, some of the reviews you left to other stories as I've been going through them, and you've really intruiged me. You seem to have a really good grasp on the characters and use words really well :) - so I was totally excited to find you've written a story! And let me tell you this is just great. Very sweet, and I believe another reviewer used the word 'sincere' to describe it, which is exactly on the money. This is a very honest look into the early friendhship of the girls.

It's really great to see you delve into Galinda's complex character a little by writing of her worries about getting old. That's a very interesting and also slightly sad insight into the character. It's terrible to think that Galinda feels she has to rely soley on her natural beauty to succeed in life.
But hey, it is lovely that Elphie agreed to help her overcome it - that they've agreed to help each other :)

This is just a really lovely story - do write more if the urge ever strikes, I really love your writing style. Hugs!
eppie
2007-02-22 . chapter 1
Bravo--this was fun!! You're a very talented writer. I always wondered what the two would have to talk about early on in their friendship...humor and silliness is always a good way to go. So, yay. Liked it muchly.
Krazy Kelsey
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
Well that wasn't as bad as you made it out to be. Though I must laugh at the shoe fight...lol shoe fight. Very fluffy, very pink, very cute and i loved it.
unrestrictedparadise
2007-02-19 . chapter 1
Actually this is very nicely written. Job well done. Hope to see more from you!
RebeccaJames
2007-02-19 . chapter 1
Very silly and fun and honest and sincere at the same time. :D

"Elphaba looked down at her breakfast, mashing it up into an unattractive mess." - I love this sentence. No idea why, it's just awesome.

“White pants after Labor Day, socks with sandals, brown and black ensemble, red, pink, and orange on redheads, beehive’s, tan lines, blue nail polish, leopard, zebra, animal printed anything, painted floors, eggplant couches, overalls, moustaches, mullets, penciled-in eyebrows, and… and Hawaiian dancing girl trinkets!”
hahahahahahahahahaha- score one for Elphie.
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