It's over. D: *sad* But I am excited that you are posting a new story.

And "vaguely normal"... oh Lisa, I highly doubt that. And I'm glad it isn't because then we would find Jackson & Lisa's life so fascinating, would we?

You did a fantastic job as usual and I can't wait to see what you have for us next. :)

Awesome full circle end. Great, I can't believe it's over. :(
Great job!

This is gonna sound weird but I have twin cousins who were born on different days, too. And they're fraternal. I think it's cool. :)

Gah! I got to the end of what you have so far. You said that it's the end soon, so I can't wait to see what you have in store for us. I have this fear that not all the heads are dead or that Phoebe might be up to something. D: Anyway, until your next update, Starz

Whoa. A chapter of revelations... But I doubt that this is the end of Jackson's problems...

I'm glad Jackson is finally breaking (albeit slowly) through his mental barriers. I also want to know more about Hediyeh and what Hezbollah made her do as a child... O_o... I saw a documentary once about how some of these warring nations train children to be soldiers from an earlier age. Seeing an 8-yr-old with an AK-47 nearly broke my heart.

I get the feeling that Lyna is not as cold as she appears to be. In fact, sometimes I think she cares more for Lisa than she does for Jackson. O.O

I'm excited that Phoebe is back in the picture. I just hope that she is helping. You know, despite all your new original characters, I am *still* able to follow it... so I think you do a good job at explaining things. It's as if I'm watching a spy-genre type of movie. Very exciting. :)

Dun, dun, dun! So Augustine is Dr. Milwood's & Greene's daughter... UH-OH. And Jackson is relapsing. This is so suspenseful and I seriously have spent A LOT of time reading your trilogy. O.O But it's worth it! :) Now off to read the rest... :)...

I really hope you try to get in contact with Wes Craven and send your series to him. If he doesn't turned this into a sequel to the actual movie, (of course not a straight out sequel, as so much happened) than have him publish this into book form. Where this series is written as the sequel to the movie, but by book. That would be beyond awesome as I can tell Wes Craven would enjoy this, it's on the level of geniusy that he is so used to. Or rather what he tries to do as the man is more horror, than thriller anyways. (sighs happilly) Gawd, I love this series. Tomrrow, I'm going to reread them all again, starting from Proxy to Toccata and Fugue. (This is at least my third time rereading the entire stories back to back!)

Brilliant! There really isn't much to say about this story and it's sequel! But the terms fantastic, unbelieviable do come to mind. These stories were pure genius and you, my dear, is such a wonderful author. Your action scenes are written so well! Best on this website without a doubt!

WOW, Great chapter. I was expecting it to end this chapter for some reason. I am lookin foward to seeing Lisa's reaction.

I think i am confused, Is elini on jackson's side or the poulainS. update soon please.

YAY!! im so glad you updated and it was a very good chapter btw=)).

OMG FINALLY
post more soon!

once again i have to tell you I love the way you're carrying the plot... i always forget to review but i really worship your creative gifts, like this story...please update soon.