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Duchess Alexandra 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuse"I like to think of myself in third person." Zack would do that. You've got him in character, and it makes me want to hug poor Zack. Thank you for writing about Zack- there seems to be so many overdone BB fics in the fandom and not enough Zack. Fantastic fic.
xfirefly9x 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful and perfect and so very Zach. I love this! Any chance of more Zach fic? ;)
greyslostwho 2007-11-23 ch 1,	abuseWeird, but good. I love Zack.
Misile 2007-03-07 ch 1,	abuseI talk to myself/think of myself/talk about myself in third person too... I can totally picture Zack doing that too. The story was really sweet and well written. Thanks!
siapom 2007-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI liked your approach to this challenge. :) Actually, I could really see Zack taking that approach to life. I really enjoyed this piece.
medicgirl 2007-03-01 ch 1,	abuseThis is great! I love Zack-centered fiction, and this is spot-on! It seems like the way Zack would look at his life, and know the need to be patient, whether he can or not.
avaleighfitzgerald 2007-02-22 ch 1,	abuseSam, Thanks for your entry to this month's Cullen's Bull-Pen Challenge. Your fanfic has been read by one of the February judges: avaleighfitzgerald. Good Luck, we hope you had fun writing it! Ava [February '07 Judges: BonesDBchippie & avaleighfitzgerald]
BonesDBchippie 2007-02-21 ch 1,	abusethenaughtydingo, AS much as it pains me to NOT do a true review...alas, I must remain biased so... Thank you for your entry into this month's Cullen's Bull-Pen Challenge. Your ff has been read by official (sounds important huh!?) February judge: ~BonesDBchippie. Good Luck and hope all your Valentine's "Desires" were fulfilled! ~G :D [February '07 Judges: BonesDBchippie & avaleighfitzgerald]
Newlib92 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseI like Zack a lot and I think you did a really great job with this. I want him to find a real life someday and be happy. Good job, and I hope you don't get disqualified. And I think Zack refering to himself in 3rd person is kind of funny. And a lot like him. Good job.
ImKindaOffBalance 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseaw. so cute! I love Zack, he's so adorable, and you definitely captured his adorableness! Great job!
MintExpresso 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseYay! Zack! I love Zack. Not enough gets written about him. I think you did a good job conveying Zack's thoughts and desires, and the change of pronouns was interesting- I can see where it might come from, but a little more of an explanation as to why he thinks like that might have added to the effect a little. Anyways, great fic! I hope you continue to write up some non-BB stuff... even if some people are deterred by it, others are attracted to it.
jemb 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseI don't normally read fics that are not BB related coz I don't identify with the characters as much but I gave this a shot, particularly because it was for the CBP challenge. I too have trouble writing in the first person, it's nice to know others struggle also. Anyway, I liked this. It seems a good analysis of Zach and since on the show we don't know a huge amount about him except he's super smart, has a big family and struggles with women and social interaction, you did well.
Bsquared19 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseInteresting choice! You go Zack true love is worth waiting for!
Pereybere 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseI think this is brilliant. I hope it doesn't get disqualified, but, I think if you remove 'he' and put in 'I', in most places it works just as well! Don't be afraid to write in first person sometimes! Thanks for the insight into the enigma that is Zach Addy! Andi xo
karalea 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseZack. -hugs him and his ionospheric IQ again-

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