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| Quill-32 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseOoh, an excellent look at what his return could have been like. Very realistic and sad, and I think you portrayed Grissom perfectly. |
| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseHm. Sad... ~IGC t DM |
| toothchick 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI know that this story is complete--but I really would love for this to continue on... |
| Beckster 2007-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've been wondering; where did the title come from? That's all :o) |
| TyriaT 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseYou do a really good job showing Grissom's struggle trying to change for Sara by telling her how he truly feels. He knows he'll lose her if he says nothing, but for some reason he's always tongue-tied around her. Great job! :) |
| Lauren 2007-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was incredible. What more can I say? |
| anniehiltner 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat! |
| Liz00 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed that muchly. Yours was the first fanfic I've read that I can actually imagine happening. So...rock on and keep writing :) |
| Grisslybear 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI know I'm repeating myself when it comes to reviewing your stories but I have to--it is all about characterization and you just simply know these characters' voices. “When I die, I want you to scatter my ashes in the San Francisco Bay. So I’ll always be close to where we met.”--this line is so powerful, and moreover, it is not just a powerful line, it is one that you know Grissom could say, although he holds off on all other words of emotion. |
| debnz 2007-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abusehi there , this was very good , I think grissom deserve's to suffer abit after the way he's treated sara and I like the way you delt with that aspect and the way you you almost made him seem like an out sider after keppler's death. |
| Kristafied 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseLovely, wistful story. Such yearning in Grissom, I love how you've written this. |
| aneumapi 2007-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey it is so wonderfull, you should consider writting a longer story, I loved it, so into character and i love angst but romance as well. loved it¡ PLEASE WRITE A LONGER STORY! |
| Ashleigh24 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseOh wow!! That was so beautiful. So sad, but the ending was perfect. At first I freaked out, because I read it without that last paragraph! lol But this was the perfect ending. Wonderful job. |
| luv0817 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWow- that was deep. V. nicely written. |
| Chicklit 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseSo funny! This morning I read the story before work and went WTF? Did she really leave it there? I figured there had to be some sort of snafu so I waited and was happily rewarded this evening with the "real" fic. This was lovely as always -- I really, really, really adore the way you write this relationship. You consistently nail the nerdy middle-aged aspect of Grissom that I think many writers tend to miss. And yet, in your world, he's still a hottie despite his inner nerd. ['cause hey, William Petersen is a hottie ;)]. So, as usual, thanks! PS -- Typos above on "bear" during Nick's speech -- should be bare, and "the time eek by" which should be eke. :) |