"Oh, unfettered joy." I think I must have read that snippet four or five times. So perfectly Jade & Anise! Sigh. I love it.

Wow, That's was lots of fun!! With Anise and Jade planning something evil together, it's just hilarious! I wonder what happened in the end..? Who drank it...? Great job Omniflyer and Griffinkhan!! =3

Heh he, Anise and Jade teaming up to do something is my favourite kind.Hilarious.But the last sentence was like'Aw,poor Luke'.Kinda makesit a lil sad after all that funny conversation.

I thought this was hilarious. I was laughing out loud as I was reading it and my mom looked at it and thought i was weird.

XD Nice. Nice. I luv Jade. XD

That is HILARIOUS!! XD

Awesome. I especially love Jade and Anise's evilness (Jade being more evil obviously)XD

Luke's muscle spasm sounds like a plot device. But I like the result, just wish it was caused by something less plot deviceish. Altough I wouldn't be surprised if Jade somehow caused the spasm just to see what would happen. Everyone is very IC, Jade and Anise are such fun characters. The poison, the sob story for the gel base All of which I can see happening in the game.

This was both very amusing and cute. I like this story alot, good writing.

Wow, this story was like amazing! I can really see this like an anime playing out in my mind!

Poor poor Guy...he needs one of those snore tablets or something before Jade gets tempted to stab him in his sleep..

Such cute Jade and Anise togetherness! They really do go well together like scary, demonic monsters!

Luke: Am I gonna die..?
Tear: Well of course you are! *pats his head*
Luke: Oh...*sweats*

Nice...
That was random. It would have been even more random if Luke or Natalia had grabbed Guy's drink instead.

Either way, nice job!

This is awesomeness! Jade's so bad! I love it! Excellent job to both of you!

Ooh, co-authoring... fun. ^^ And since the both of you are such great authors, it doesn't ruin the story at all, having to go from one style to another and such.

...And I never thought Guy would be one to snore... GENIUS! ::adds to favs::

Heh.

This was great, Griffinkhan and Omniflyer. Heh. Who, indeed, drank the poison, lol.

Oh, this was funny. I love the cliffhanger ending. I want to do a story like this with Luke! (But I have to finish mine first... *cries*)

Good job though!