great start! i was also going to do something similar to this but you got there before me! hehe. i like charlie and claire. i can't exactly write them well but I really do like their characters! please continue with this... it's fab!
just a note:
'Claire said in her thick English accent'
claire has an australian accent, but apart from that it was all accurate! well done!

Wow, Charlie was a huge jerk in that one. This reminds me of why I dislike his character so much! He's so darn jealous and protective! Okay, so that was a little exaggerated for him in this fic, but it was interesting anyway. Keep going.