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Etherelemental
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
That was quite interesting. Although, a few nit-picking points is that parole and probation are different, not exactly sure how, but I'm sure they are. And Shego is on probation, not parole. -_^ Though, I'm assuming that the kids are over at their grandparents home, Justine and Felix are off together somewhere, and Monique was sent away in the same fashion Zita was. Though, it was also quite amusing. I have a vague idea of where you got the names Rina and Mag. -_^ Which made it a bit more amusing. ^_^ Though, I think it would have been also amusing for Ron to voice his cluelessness at the end, but it was still really well worked out. Although, I think a follow-up would likely be good to see. As in what Bonnie's conclusion is. Anyway, thanks for posting this. It was really entertaining. ^_^
creativetoo
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
Terrific story.
Will there be more? Will there? Huh!
King in Yellow
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
I'm flattered that you are setting a story in my universe (BTW, Mouse did ask me first if I minded. I said go for for it. But I appreciated the warning). I am sometimes a little suspicious of people who protest too much. I am curious about how far Bonnie will be willing and/or able to take this. Thanks for writing it and I am anxious to see more.

KiY

Oh, have to go add this to my favorites because it connects to my stuff.
W0lf The Hunter
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
Ohmygodalmighty... seriously, I've laughed this hard since... I cannot even recall! Darnit... way to go, seriously!

Any more coming?

Motor-Ed
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