I love this story. Just love it. Love. Love. Love.

I do have to say there were some times when I wanted to take it out of the screen, rip it apart, and eat it, but I thought it would be bad for my stomache so I read on and desided it would taste like cookies if I had eaten it. Haha.

I wouldn't have chosen to heal Zuko scar, tho I was ready to kill somthing if you killed him.

I thought the OC pairrings where great! Changes Haru's name was a good call. I have to say added Ty Lee in was one of the greatest parts of this story (aside from the whole Zutara thing, which will never be anything awesomer).

This story made my day(s). I'm a sucker for Happy Endings!

Fin

~Leal

I will have you know, you kept me up CONSIDERABLY past my bedtime. I thought I'd try a chapter or two around midnight to see if I wanted to read it, it is now 10:30am and I am trying to wrap my brain around how FANTASTICALLY AWESOME this story is! I am insanely impressed that you stuck through such a novel, because that's what it is- an entire book. Joy! Thank you so, so much for writing this and sharing it with us.

I know this story has been completed for awhile but I thought it only right to leave a review after reading your story straight through. Normally I am not very fond of stories with a lot of OCs but I thought you handled yours quite well. For the most part they blended well into the avata verse. Overall I'm quite fond of the story.

Favorite part: Zuko being shocked in the end.
I love the 'mentally giving themselves points' gag. And I just found your sequel, which I just gave you the 200th review for. Since I got the 400th review for this too, I think I deserve some kind of double reward ;) Any ideas?
Although you will probably get an insane amount of email notifications for this, reviews make authors happy - so hopefully that won't be a bad thing. That's enough for today though, I don't want to annoy you!

Favorite moment: Sokka griping about Zuko and Katara to Toph. I enjoyed his protectiveness in the story - it wasn't taken over-the-top or made too dramatic but it was there.

Favorite moment: Ty Lee learning to take care of herself after Azula.

Favorite moment: Zuko and Yuiko's talk

It was a bit weird seeing Haru so desperate for love, but satisfying to know he will get it soon!
Fave moment: Zuko sleeping on Katara's lap.

Favorite part: Zuko finding everyone acting insanely.
A note - this is the only story I've seen where Iroh doesn't forgive Zuko immediately and it is a refreshing (for us, although painful for Zuko) change.

Favorite part: Katara punching Zuko and telling him she won't share.

A very very very happy and satisfying end and perfect for your story. Glad to hear the explanations of everything, especially the violence. Even though I didn't like all the pairings except Zutara particularly, I still enjoyed it and that says a lot.
I think you deserve 300 reviews so I'm going to go back and tell you about some of my favorite parts of the story. :)

My favorite moment of this chapter was Yukio's hug to Zuko.

I love Zuko's return.

I liked the way you healed Zuko, and being the big dope I am, I never saw the Ty Lee healing coming, just like a lot of other things in this story!

I love the healing of Zuko, but I'm not sure he'll be the same without the scar. I'll just have to wait and see!