the ending was sweet!

Why don't you place it under crossovers?

And Sango should be much less trusting of Gaara!

Heh, okay, so I like your story, I really do. The plot is good, but I think your actual writing could use a little maturation. And I'm pretty sure Inuyasha would be stronger than Gaara. I mean, Gaara's strong, I know. Really strong. But Inuyasha is too. Inuyasha is also far older and, although you seem to think otherwise, wiser. I honestly hate it when authors make him seem stupid and shallow, like you've done - although to a lesser degree than many others. And Shippou has risked his life to help others many times. You're making him sound shallow as well. And the part where you said, "Inuyasha stalled, slightly stunned by everything that was going on. Shippo risking his life, Sango suddenly helping him, Gaara’s relentless attacks; it was all happening so fast, he wasn’t quite sure of what he should do," doesn't really make much sense, because those kind of situations happened all the time to the Inu-tachi. And Inuyasha was being unnecessarily cruel to Shippou. Well, that happens a lot, but Kagome would usually do something about it. So, yeah. Those are just some of the incongruencies I saw. Good story otherwise, though.

Alright, Gaara's psycho theory is gone to play. This is so awesome. I am loving the set up of the story and the plot so far. Good job. Just got to love Sabaku no Gaara

Heheh, nice. I felt bad for Kakashi. lol. But, its nice to know that the story is aimed towards a happy ending. I'm a little sad that this awesome story has to end, but, hey, it'll give you more time in your day. Maybe with a little break from writing you'll have a spark of inspiration. :)

Anyway, I can't wait to see how it ends! So, until next time, bye:D

O.o Wow. You're good at toying with my mind... Please update soon! This is such a good story! I can't wait to see how it ends.

What happened? Oh well, I'll find out. This is a great story! i love the fact that you're tying up the loose ends. Some authors just leave everything confusing and don't really FINISH the story. Update soon ^-^

Wow. This is getting really dramatic, but it's really good! I really, really want to know how you plan to end it! :D

Oh no! Why did it have to be Temari!? Well, I trust that you'll end the story well. Please update soon:)

Thats Kakashi for you always has everything planed out even before his death... although I am really sad that he had to die T_T I can't wait for the rest of this awesome story
~Grim Goodbye

You could have kakashi come back after resting a bit. no one knows where the portal goes anyway.

Awesome chapter, I can't believe that Sasuke can see the jewels too, i think it must be cause of his sharigan. I can't wait for the next chapter
~Grim Goodbye

Great Chapter, I can't believe Sakura killed Sai... I hope they defeat Naraku! I can't wait for the battle. Until next time
~Grim Goodbye

"'OK, Gaara…I’m so sorry! It’ll never happen again!' Kakuro reported in a very intimidated voice. His voice was filled with fear of his big brother."

Although it is true Kankurou used to be scared of Gaara, Gaara is the youngest of the Sand Siblings. He is not Kankurou's older brother.

wow this chapter was a thrill ride, I hope Sai is alright in the end and I can't wait for the battle with Naraku. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next
~Grim Goodbye