I think this was lovely as well. I feel so sad about poor sirius! it really was brilliant, your story!
oh, and I really enjoyed your disclaimer: "If I owned Harry Potter…I’D BE WRITING THE FREAKING SEVENTH BOOK, not some slashy fanfiction!" hahaha!!

I loved this, it was so touching... the feeling in it was deep, but expressed in a very beautiful and subtle manner. I can't wait to read the next bit.

The constant lament for Sirius in this chapter is just heart-wrenching, it seriousl made me ache. Once again your descriptions are fabulous and your attention to detail really does make the story so much more substasial. It's so sad to think that Remus went to visit Sirius in Azkaban and still didn't believe him :(

I truly loved both of these chapters, you have juxtaposed the characters so wonderfully and I think that your characterisation is just spot on.

- Fray x

This was wonderful! Your descriptions of Azkaban are so haunting and terrfyingly real, even in the smallest of your details like the iron bars on the window and the constant mention of the Dementors.

My favourite part was the comparison between Sunrise and Sunset and their different explainations for both, that was simply a very stunning passage.

Well Done! (on to moony now!)

- Fray x

Poor Remus. I always liked him in the books and you really bring him to life here. Are you planning to continue this? I see that you've labeled this as a "two-shot" but you really seem to have a handle on these characters' emotions. I'd love to see you do more.

Wow! This is very intense. Very dark too, but beautifully written and very real. I really liked it. I can believe this is what Sirius actually felt in that terrible place. Well done!

Awesome!

What was that nice fic you read?

-sigh- I still love the diction, though :)
The song seems to fit right into the story. -big big smile!-
a.N

Beautiful wording, loved it!

I honestly like this one. But I do agree that the Sirius one was a tad bit better...lol. Great job with these songfics. :)

Aw. I love this.
So good :)
Can't wait to see what you have next chapter

So beautiful. I just read both parts. I adored your way of describing a Remus/Sirius type affection.

In otherwords. Great job.

XOXO Mrs. James Harold Potter

*Smiles*

You may like part 1 better, but I actually prefer part 2. It could just be that I love Remus more than Sirius, but ... something about this second chapter seemed to grab me and say brilliant!

Great job

Cuba

:) Well, I have to go, I'm supposed to be getting ready for school now. Anyway, I just wanted to say that this is beautiful, and that the mild slash just adds to it so much. You use such great imagery, and I will definately be back to read the next chapter.

:)

Cubs