This is a beautiful 1st chapter -- your writing style is very engaging. Please continue!!

Well, I just read the whole story and I loved it.

You capture the emotion really really well, and I can imagine how everyone is feeling.

The only problem is that the story hasn't been update in forever... and I really want to read the ending...

its so good im waiting impatiently for the next update.

great story. Please update soon.

Update soon as I can't wait to see what happens

HAHAHAHA...!
ROLLING ON THE FLORE LAFEING MY A*S OFF!
I LOVE THE FUNIES! KEEP IT UP!

HAHHAHAHAHAHHA
Vampierisum!...i thingk thats how its spelt ...my spelling suks!
X-RAY VISHON! PRICLES!
KEEP UP WITH THE FUNIES!I LOVE IT

is this story discontinued?

Is your new story / next story called on the mend?
i was laughing so much that tears were rolling down my cheeks when i was reading the part about being a man and stuff ( chapter 16 with emmett and jasper after they find out about what edward and bella did in the forest )...
I think most of this is a awesome story... some of it was sad and some of it was hellerious!

Where's the rest? I love this story because u have managed to incorporate Twilight with one of my favorite movies, A Walk To Remember. Please finish this story.

I love this story! It's very well written and you have all the charters' personalities captured perfectly. Please Update soon! :)

So what are they going to do about Alice? And is a Renesmee going to happen?

It's weird, I actually wrote all of the letters down before I got to the bottom of the page. On the mend, right?

Hm, maybe they'll get separated, and what happened the first time Bella went to Port Angeles will happen... (Getting stalked/almost assaulted by strange men)

dude, Edward, she's going to die anyway if you don't CHANGE her!!