good story. please continue. I might take you out back if you don't!

I like it please keep writing. At least fix it a little and write more for it and I will have a great time.

Haha no I liked it a lot!
It was really cute, y'know?
Woulda been better with sex. >_>
But it was still good.

It has potential! I await the next chapter!

It's good! Go shoot some cans instead.

This most definitely does not need to be shot~

I love this story >w

:3

Hehe Nononono don't kil... Write more! I lOVE it!

LMAO Very funny, great start. I'm hooked, give up another chapter!

NO, No, NO! Don't hate it, I don't hate it all, in fact Ilove it! Must have it continued so good! Please!

Please don't kill it...that's too Old Yeller for me..and that movie was sad. I quite like it...but I don't like how there isn't more ^_^. Reno is hilarious. I don't think it needs to be fixed. As an art student I understand how we all hate our own work, but, take my work for it, this is golden. So keep writing damn it. ^_^

Lol. I don't hate you '_' I think it was good. Pretty much hillarious. =]

Dude i loved it. i love all your reno/cloud stuff. i've never thought of them as a couple before, PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Needs shower sex. Are you gonna add the shower sex in as another chapter?
Shower sex is my friend. It's both clean and dirty at the same time. It defies the laws of physics!

NO! KEEP IT!! MUST HAVE MORE!...pwese...