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| Blackxthorn 2008-06-25 ch 14, | abuseOkay, so I just finished reading it all, and it was overall quite enjoyable. Although I almost smashed the computer when Kaname and Aido died. I was sitting there waiting for them to come back to life or something. =[ Oh well. It turned out great, I loved it. |
| Blackxthorn 2008-06-24 ch 4, | abuseOnly on chapter four and I can tell I'm going to love it. =] |
| kaito142 2008-05-12 ch 14, | abuseT.T (still crying for Aido's death) So cruel...for making Aido die...Well, Kaname was dead too, and it come with a shock, but I reaaly don't care for him. But still! I think I like Kain with Arashi too! Do make a sequel for this. Pretty please! |
| arya21 2008-05-09 ch 14, | abuseone of the best fanfics ever! I saw your improvement in every chapter! WOW, not many people from this site can pull out such a great story! Though I kinda feel bad for the death of kaname but at least it has a happy ending (don't deny that!!) I really enjoyed it! maybe you can make a sequel :P |
| arya21 2008-05-09 ch 7, | abuseblood in a bottle anyone? that part really got me laughing!! better move on to the next chapter... |
| MoonCrisis 2008-04-02 ch 14, | abuseWoah... That was an awesome story...With an amzing epilouge/ending...Im speechless... |
| Kira Hijishima 2008-03-30 ch 2, anon. | abusewow that was good. But I didn't get the last paragraph and ARASHI IS TOO SERIOUS IT'S DEPRESSING! |
| kill the drama queen 2008-03-30 ch 14, | abuseHaha, the chairman is still as lovable as ever with his "squealing". I'm glad that everything worked out fine for everyone in the epilogue, even though Kaname and Aidou are dead. I also really liked that little bit at the end "Happy endings don’t exist. But how can they when endings don’t exist?" and so on. It just seemed fitting I suppose. The little hint towards the possibility of Kain and Arashi becoming a couple amused me, I guess that would work out better than Arashi and Aidou. XD I like the idea of writing an entire fic out before posting it in order to ensure regular updates. I wish I had thought of that, it seems more logical than what I'm always doing...harhar. Good luck in your future fanfic endeavors! ^-^ |
| Twilight Kunoichi 2008-03-29 ch 14, | abuseWow, I loved it! Kain and Arashi would be so cute! I love the name Amaya too, I've got one named Amaya (although she's in the possible Ronin Warriors fic that I need to start writing again!) |
| SmallButPowerful 2008-03-29 ch 14, | abuseI really liked the Epilogue, it fit them perfectly. I can't wait to see what you come out with next. :) |
| MemoryStillHauntsMe 2008-03-29 ch 14, | abusei've gotta say that was an adorable ending lol :D good job :D MemoryStillHauntsMe |
| randomnessgirl 2008-03-29 ch 14, | abusewow...i was kinda surprised when arashi said that she liked kain...but it was still great!! wow...(imagining arashi's and kain's wedding) |
| randomnessgirl 2008-03-29 ch 13, | abuseah...i just read ur story again... IT STILL ROCKS! sorry...im kinda high right now from drinking orange juice... but i still love it! |
| randomnessgirl 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseEverything is great in your story!plz write a sequel!pretty please? |
| MeaKuran 2008-03-11 ch 13, | abusewah! Not only did Aidou die but kaname did to :( but other than thats it's AMAZING!Haha i love thirteen. Can't wait and i really mean that im going crazy here to see the epilogue!:D |