I like this a lot. :) Here we get another chance to see Danny from an outsider's point of view but whereas the other ones are complete strangers, Paulina knows him. Instead of meeting him for the first time she shows us how he has changed.

And not only him, but her as well! I like the way you portray her (and Danny for that matter). She's definitely the Paulina that we know and love (or perhaps not love) but she's grown too because of her father.

I love the style of this too, it was almost poetic in certain parts. :) And your language as always is so unique and descriptive.

:D And now onto the next chapter of that series...when I get the time. ^^;
-Dizgirl

After I got over the initial shock of actually having a touch of empathy for Paulina, I was finally able to respond! Man, I don't like it when someone makes me feel sorry for that shallow girl, mainly because I'm a DxS shipper all the way. And Paulina has done enough damage with coming between the two whom I think are perfect for the other, she doesn't deserve my sympathy...Then again, looks like she got the same dose of reality that Valerie did, and when that bites, it forces them to change--sometimes for the better.

Oh, gee, there ya go making me empathize with her again!! Oh, well, it's just that this piece was very well written, especially when written in Paulina's POV. There were only a few minor typos but that was all.

But don't do it again--make me feel sorry for Paulina--that is! I have the sneaky suspicion, however, that she will revert to her shallow self now that her father is back and her income has a jump at pushing her back to snobbery. At least, that is what I hope! I just don't want to spend my time understanding her! Great job!! truephan

i think you need to post more!

~cd

m for ma'am or m for miss/ms/mrs bitchy?

*taps the monitor* aptly named,
brittney

You and your DAMNED CLIFFIES!
Evil.

I have SO many questions! But, I suppose I'll wait to see what happens next...maybe get some answered.

Amazing per usual Dead'lles!

Amelia,

Wewt!! I cannot belive you got it up. This fic is going to pwn all of your previous collection, and that's no joke.
Eve
P.S. I apologise for my sorry attempt at a review. I've been listening to my Fight Scene and Chase Scene CD's all day trying to plot my next chapter, and I'm reaaly hyper!

You KNOW I LOVE your descriptions! And they are SUPERB in this little dabble/prelude to a chapter! I really love the banter between Sam and the old woman. And the suspense/dread Sam has in being in a place that she OBVIOUSLY doesn't want to be in! And the suspense the old lady throws at her about Danny was the perfect touch to rivet this chappie! GREAT JOB! truephan

This will prove VERY interesting.

By the by...I adore that song on your bio...that little boy is so creepy! *does dance*

Amelia,

Poke.
I knew you were on my fav list for a good reason, that was Fantastic! You have no right to complement my sorry attempts at fanfiction whaen you have this kind of gold bubbling out of your computer. By the by, you need to post in your forum before I can reply to the thus non-existent topic of discussion.
Peace, love and KitKat bars,
Evermore.

Wow. Never been a JB kind-of-person, but if anyone can pull this off, it's you! Just don't let him near Sam!! Don't trust that romeo! heh-heh! Great start/preview. Waiting for Frostbite, of course. Great job! truephan

m, i don't think that everyone i know would call me patient. *muses* exact opposite, actually.

interesting, i never read a James Bond/Danny Phantom crossover. would it be possible to continue this? it sounds like it'll be a hit (at least in my book),
brittney

Well, that was interesting. James Bond, huh?

Is this going to happen in the main story, or is it just one of many, many possibilities?

Yayz for FUBAR-ness kazi-chan! I daresay this is the first time I have left word of my new self on thy written works (in layman's terms-first review for teh Kaziness!) Really, I just needed to fav you, but this is so much simpler!
Ciao!

I may be reading it all wrong...but it seemed to me like he was looking at heaven or something like that...it was really nice, but really depressing...*sigh*

I guess I'll add my two cents about the Frostbite thing...
In all honesty, you haven't changed Danny as much as you think you have. Sure, there are rather large differences...but he's damn near the same character Butch Hartman started with(albeit he's a bit more mature). You've kept Danny in character and down to earth even with all the crazy things that seem to be going down around him.
In the end, its your choice...but, I would truely hate to see such an amazing story go unfinnished.

Okay, that was about a dollar fifty...but hell, two cents never bought a pepsi right?

Amelia Tomashi

hmm, was he bleeding? *shrugs* anywhoo, you really drew up a nice scene. i was thinking a row of fall trees on a snow-filled path. *sighs* i need to draw better; mebbe i can make it kinda shadowy with oil pastels. *thinks* yeah, ther might do it.

brittney