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| Avatarfanx2 2008-08-01 ch 8,  | abuseIt's a pretty good fic. Update soon! |
| Ilse O'Hara 2008-07-26 ch 8, | abuseI LOVE this story...it is my favorite Eragon fic so far. Please continue to update! I love that Arya and Eragon, even Saphira, are all kept in character. That is extremely hard to do. Very nice job! |
| deddy luvs eragon 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseim a bad speller too lol i agree no one likes arya but i do! Her and eragon are purfect for each other but arya is being ...well...picky i think she will love him. |
| Faerie of Murtagh 2008-06-12 ch 8, | abuseVery good! I like your story! Update soon!! |
| debugger315 2008-05-23 ch 8, | abuseYou have done an amazing job at portraying the characters of Eragon - and I would really appreciate seeing more chapters. I really like your story. I have to agree with what you said on your profile - the E / A is probably my favorite. cheers! keep up the good work de_bugger |
| Glaedrz 2008-04-11 ch 8, | abuseAmazing, such a shame you do not continue this |
| RockCityRoadStar 2008-04-05 ch 8, | abuseIf i ask you to update soon, it won't do much, will it? cause ur a good writer. |
| Ryder Blade 2008-03-29 ch 8, | abuse-__- The story is really good and you should really update it |
| sparkling-stone 2007-10-08 ch 7, | abuseYou must update! It is cruel to make people wait this long! Pretty soon, it will be a year! This is an amazing story, or I wouldn't bother reviewing. But you need to update! |
| Wise Pallas Athena 2007-07-29 ch 8, | abuseGreat story, I love the both points of view, it's really great! Good luck writing the next chapter, i can't wait |
| AlinaAnila 2007-07-04 ch 8, | abuseThat was cool! I know you havnt written in about 20 years but pls keep goin! But watch your words, you often used the wrong word in a sentence, like when Saphira said "One day we will be free to explore the world at our PLEASER" and when eragon said "... how they shined brightly without a worry in the WORD" |
| Lloyd Neruameshi 2007-06-18 ch 8, | abuseupdate soon |
| powerhungry 2007-05-25 ch 8, | abusehey i like this stoy a lot. keep it goin! |
| ali-lou 2007-05-24 ch 8, | abuseGreat story, Hopefully AryaEragon soon :) ! Well written. I loved the sparring scene at the end |
| Du Andlatlam 2007-04-13 ch 8, | abuseI like ur story, but u really need to work on spelling and grammer. Update soon |