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Reviews For: Glock in Hand

Moonlight-Arashi
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusewhy did she kill henry? sorry, i didn't finish all of it, i found it boring so i skipped...
ShadowFoxFolk
2007-02-25
ch 1,
abuseOh-kay...definately...er...unusual. The whole Gano thing freaked me out alot (especially her referring to herself in the third person O_o). Not to be mean or anything but Rika was out of character...alot. Ryo wasn't though so that's ok

Keep on writing as it sharpens the mind

ShadowFoxFolk/RenahMoonsinger
karik88
2007-02-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseok that was weird, and ruki referrung to herself in the 3rd person was annoying, but hey keep on writing
nuttx
2007-02-21
ch 1,
abuseWell-written, very. The 'darkness' theme ran well and flowed subtly throughout the whole piece- I like!
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