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| Moonlight-Arashi 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusewhy did she kill henry? sorry, i didn't finish all of it, i found it boring so i skipped... |
| ShadowFoxFolk 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseOh-kay...definately...er...unusual. The whole Gano thing freaked me out alot (especially her referring to herself in the third person O_o). Not to be mean or anything but Rika was out of character...alot. Ryo wasn't though so that's ok Keep on writing as it sharpens the mind ShadowFoxFolk/RenahMoonsinger |
| karik88 2007-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseok that was weird, and ruki referrung to herself in the 3rd person was annoying, but hey keep on writing |
| nuttx 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseWell-written, very. The 'darkness' theme ran well and flowed subtly throughout the whole piece- I like! |