Great idea, this fanfic. It's really good, and I'm eager to know how it'll all turn out. I hope you'll update soon-ish.

Hm...I wonder how Yuki K.'ll react to Shuichi? anyway, i really like the way you've written this, it fits Tatsuha well. :)

You haven't lost your touch eh :) This author here is one of the best on this site. We go way back 2002. She's got a sharp eye for detail but does not overpower her stories with trivial words. Her words are vocative and beautiful. Great job as always :)

blinkie

I'm so, so very glad to have found another well-written Tatsuha-centric fic. It saddens me that there are not enough fics out there that portray Tatsuha as the teenager that he is. I think you did a very good job with his characterization. Extra love for this fic goes towards the future Ryuichi/Tatsuha/Ryuichi. That pairing is made of win. :D

Kitazawa's ghost is also a very nice twist to the story, I've never seen that done before.

Thanks for the good read. It's been a while since I've last read a good Tatsuha fic and I'll be looking forward to reading more of this!

god you take long for such a good cliffie T_T i love mika/tohma >_<

As far, it's interesting. Your a great writer, there is beautiful vocabularies and describtions that doesn't over do it. Update!

good but where's Ruy?? :( Still, it's a good story

you are allowed to switch perspectives if you want ^-^ but it would look better if you do it ater a big change in tats life (say his father´s death/ meeting ryuichi) - my god he´s dense! XD I was starting to think he really wasn´t smarter than eiri XD I´ll be waiting anxiously for the next chapies to come ^^

Simply brilliant. I love the idea you have going for this fic, and i just utterly adore Tatsuha-centric fan fictions. The fact that you were able to include Kitazawa here is truly amazing. You were able to make it, in the least, believable and not something completely ridiculous and irritating. D:

Y'know, i have this feeling that the secret person-x-Tatsuha may be Kitazawa. D: Well, i'm not sure but that relationship strikes me as interesting, really. [I swear i'm not senile~! ^_^]

...RyuTat forever~!! Can't wait for your next update! ^_^ I'll be waiting for it!

brillant

GIVING ME NIGHTMARES! AGHH!

Quite ingenious, actually. Very amusing. It's definitely an original way of using Tatsuha's perspective and toying with his character. Excellent!