WOOT! OMG I love it! I can't wait for Leon and Angie fluff! Dead Fantasy is the stuff! I love that, I got my uncle into it :) Seriously dead fantasy is awesome! Kairi and Rinoa kicked major booty! Update soon!

I agree. Leon/Squall (Ah! It's all so confusing now) deserves a little lovin'. ~_^ Lol, they must really be friends for Cloud to say something like that. Ooh, and action's comming up too. I can't wait!

I didn't want it to end! I hope Leon starts remembering soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is amazing. It is so amazing and so late that all I can come up to tell you is that your writing is awesome, original, and I'm hooked.Bye!

Well i'm glad you updated b/c i was starting to think you gave up on this story and that would be sad b/c I really like it. This chapter is really good I liked how you used Namine and Roxas to explain what was happening. Well keep up the good work!

wow...drama...


but anyway i can't wait for the next chapter!!

keep it up!!

very very VERY good. i like it a lot. ^_^

i'm a little confused about you story...who is angela? how did zell get to twilight town? and what the HECK is wrong with poor leon?! (other than tht it was good)

I thought this chapter was good you did a good job writing the fight scene and I think that the story is progressing well. Everything so far is good in your story so just keep it up :)

You have indeed made an intresting OC the more I read about her the more I dislike her not because you have done any thing wroung as a writer it is just her charcter and it fits like a puzzle piece in the role she plays I expect she shall become less and less human as the story progresses. The fighting while intresting I find it a little stale just too straight forward for my taste (Also one sided but I guess you have to make Sephiroth pretty powerful but one day I want to see a story where he loses just as much as the heros). However the actual story progression I like you are making the charcters progress nicely. You might as well skip any battle in space unless it is one of words between the charcters because quite prosonally I find it hard to put the minigame that gives me flash backs to the 16 bit era into words. Some intresting theorys on Cure but I don't like them but hey your story your rules. Well I really not in a too of a chipper mood so no suggustions. Please accept my apollegys

Hmm nice story diveing deep into what happened to the residents of Radient Garden 10 years ok. The only real thing that bugged me is you just kinda made Zell and Riona show up. Hmm suggestion well next chapter is the big fight scean. Well I think you should get some of the reactions of some of the towns folk namely Seifer to the events that are unfolding at the moment. In fact I could see Seifer if he was older and had his gunblade calling Sephiroth out and well fight him until he lost the advantage and you know ran away with a bad wound. Sorry about that random museing. Well Zell and Riona should be just strong enough to protect themselfs at the moment. I can see Riku and Sora chargeing Sephiroth mutible timesgetting pushed back each time until they finnally injurs Sephiroth just enough to have him retreat and not before Mary comes out in a confused funk and get a gander at the events unfolding and of corse Sephiroth has to do his plot moveing action that I have no clue what to her.
PS-I see you metioned Vann(The Man) from FF12.

This is a really good story so far. I can't wait to see what happens with Sephiroth so make sure to ud soon plz!

I really wish people would review this, I really love this story! Try advertizing it on sites you belong to to people who will actually read it, anything! ^_^

I'd like to be the beta for this story, if you don't mind. ^_^
It's obvious you know where this story is going, and I like that a lot.
I believe I know who "Angela" really is, but we'll find out sooner or later, won't we?
My one (really little) gripe this chapter was Aerith's and Leon's ages. If you're going off of their ages in Kingdom Hearts, Leon is supposed to be older. It seems to me that you're going off their respective Final Fantasy game ages, which you then be correct.
Update soon!

I like the idea for this story a lot, awesome! I would just recommend getting a beta. If you don't want to do that, work on your grammar a lot, and I would suggest making some sort of scene breaker, it took me a couple of seconds to figure out when you were changing scenes.
Update soon!