I'm disapointed. This was a great (if sick) one-shot, and now that has been ruined. I don't like it anymore >.<

But the explanation about him near the end was interesting.

Hehe, another gore-fest, love them. I just have one question... What about Ryoga? You haven't mentioned anything other than he dissapeared. In what manner did he meet his end? :P

Fair criticism, but Ranma being a serial killer for as long as he can remember, tricking the entire NWC into believing he's just normal Ranma for so long, then going Hannibal Lecter on them has most definitely NOT been done before. Even though my work is similar to others, the way I 'execute' it, to put in a little pun there, is entirely unique.

Only thing I have to say is Ranma flipping out and killing everyone has been done before. Admittedly, this is a bit elaborate for those fics, but the thing is that makes it OOC. Ranma just isn't elaborate.

Hmm, he wasn't as throughout evil as I'd thought he would be. Clearly insane, but not evil.
Hmm, the 'food' in the kitchen has never been smarter. ;P

I don't know if I should encourage you to write more... Do what you feel is best, and let's leave it at that.

Good writing, perhaps lacking some descriptions. ;)

/ecchansama

i laughed...

its funny how death and excessive morbidity will make me do that

Wow, that was quite interesting.Great job.:)

it gave me goosebumps. amazing story!

thank you

This had shivers running down my spine...but in a good, but twisted sorta way. I love how all the deaths were described and done in such a gruesome but artistic way that describes most of the characters. It's too bad that you left out Ryoga , Dr. Tofu, and a few others as well...

That's... Interesting!
And quite plausible...

Just a question: what did Ranma do to Tofu? Just out of morbid curiosity...

I loved it, full of angst, blood and gore.

Great story... I loved how out of the box it was! Right on!

WOW THIS WAS INCREDIBLY WEL WRITTEN. i really liked this and i would like to see it pan out more...but im not sure if it has that capability. though i hope it does. i'd like to see an insane ranma on the run from the law.

You're damn sick.
But it was kinda cool, anyhow. And the killings were very creative. Maybe ranma WILL end up becoming crazy if everybody keeps being so mean with him ^_~
Good work (kinda)

Yup, definitely dark, I will give it that. Not the Ranma that I would prefer to see, but one that I can see, scarily enough.