You did a good job writing this one, captured a lot of the gothic imagery of the original writer of the comic book here. This is better than the Lazarus Heart. I read just one page of that and put it down. I never bought the book; found it in a book store and thought, "this sucks." You did a good job with this - made it a very dark story too. This one had an HPL vibe to it. I was wondering what you are capable of when you go to write original horror or Sci-Fi.

Wow. That's really all one can say to sum up this story. At times, it is a great action story, but at others, the writing is lyrical, beautiful. This story really makes me want to see the movie. Since I haven't, however, seeing how the Crow acts made me feel like Noyce: a normal guy not completely understanding what he sees. Great, altogether.