That was scary! Yet amazingly well written! Bravo!

Poetic and surreal.
It makes one think about choosing what one feels compelled to do and what one wants to do. The two entities inside of Kyouya added more depth to what's presented as his character in the show/manga. This was somewhat depressing, but definitely well-written. The ending gave me chills...

Kyoya is probably one of my favorite characters of all time, he reminds me of Hatori from fruits basket. I loved this story, especially the small bit with haruhi... Very nice.

Simply Beautiful.
The characterisation and separation of each personality was so interesting to read.
loved it.

This was the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time. I'm awestruck - the wording, the imagery, the construction, the concept, all of it came together beautifully and created a very real Kyoya, endearing and sad and so believable. Everyone else acted out their parts beautifully, too. This is a very original piece, but you executed it very well, too. I think you have written something very special. Wonderful job.

This is really very well written. I love the three different facets of Kyoya.

Poor Kyouya. (TT_TT)

OH! Crazy Kyoya! Neat.

You have a very interesting and beautiful writing style. I especially like the intermixing of the boy, Ootori and Kyouya.

Oh, and these two lines:

"Very calmly, Haruhi asked: “What happened?”

‘I died,’ the boy wanted to tell her and the Ootori took notice."

Loved them, so poignant and in-character. Many kudos!

Enjoyed it.

I guess it's too late for me to write like you. But this is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. Ever. Consider publishing.
The rythm is impecable.

Beautiful as always. I like the generousity in which you explored Kyouya both as a character and his intentions. I have to agree with basketballstarhottie before me, one of the best oneshots I have read.

-smiles-

I liked this.

*delight* I love this characterization! You should expand upon this, it is excellent!

The last sentence gave me chills. You've truly captured Kyouya in this piece.