Ok first off, WTF?! The Governor?! And second:

"Wma-ma-uh-ong?" Elizabeth tried to say through the wad of fabric impairing her speech. Jack raised an eyebrow at her, smirking.

"Why, aye, I am...," he replied. "Did Giselle tell ye? Or Scarlett, maybe?" Elizabeth blinked at him, uncomprehendingly, but Will's face went bright red.

"Jack, she asked you what took you so long... You pervert," he added in a mutter.

Bloody brillant!

Hehe can't wait to see what happens next! And horray for the Pervert Jack! You get a pineapple log now!

Wow this is getting kinda wierd, but cool too.

I wasn't expecting this fanfiction to be as good as it was! I mean that with no offense, I really enjoyed it.
"-But all we did was snog a little, and that was all her. She woke me up in the middle of the night!" That bit made me laugh out loud. You have Jack's character spot on. Fantastic.
I'm looking forwards to the next new chapter.

I am absolutely loving this story! It's fun to see a caring side of Jack.

Didn't Rumpilstilltskin take someone's first born child?

someone's going to take the baby!! or whatever it is...so do i get my cookie? lol

I love it! I'm so glad she's not mad at Jack. Then again who could be? We all love Jack. Right? Right! Anyway please update soon! It's getting so good!

cute

LOVE IT!

AH! YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME!

Ok ok yeah I couldn'r help myself again...sorry this is what multi-tasking and a headache do to you...besides being utterly distracted by Jareth! ;)

Anyway I hope everyone realizes the loveliness of this story...and I hope you write more on it too!

Ok well best try and get chapter 12 done...I promised everyone it would be out tonight...see how far that got! Hehe

~Rhia~

OH MY LORD WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT?!

Hehe ok I couldn't help myself, I'm glad you are posting them now on here.

~Rhia~