yeahhhh its cute

That was pretty good and hot ;(!

I don't know if you intended this to be funny or not, but this story got quite a few chuckles out of me, especially from the part where Goku got caught. XD The only mistakes in the story were the dialogue errors. Oh yeah, and the ending isn't crappy. It's great!

Aw that was hot! i wish it was more than a oneshot though. It was still brilliant though. I love goku/vegeta pairings!

very good

aaw...I haven't read many DBZ fanfics yet...but this has got to be the best one I've red so far...good job! - I loved it!

AWESOMW! More stories soon? *puppy eyes*

_ i like it. i read your other fics on... what was it called? . um, i think it was nfiction? ; i'm not sure, but i read those. xD i really liked the one where vegeta and goku are in the park. tho it seemed kinda ironic that there weren't any ppl in the park when they were in it xD oh the joy of writer's convenience!

This is just the kind of fics I love.

Adoration.

Goku express (sp?) hsi adoration for Vegeta.

I thought I was too short when it was over. :'3

"... his prince.."

So mushy!

And I love it. _

Keep it up, this is going to favprites.

Much, Much love, Cadoan.

yaoi... and a hint of... yuri? whatever i liked it. :) :D

Aw that was sweet and cute. And we are ALWAYS saying stuff liek that bout Murphy's law so u ain't alone. Anyways great fic :P

Luv

BEW

You should put this at:

only make the story a bit longer for any "steamy" parts of this fanfic that you want to include.

Wow, Goku's kind of creepy. Like he's a stalker of Vegeta. But I really liked this one-shot, especially with the infused humor and your reference to Murphy's law. And obviously, something is going to happen between the two of them. They do make an interesting couple, that's for sure. Good job!

Both words in your index I was not familiar with. (Key word- was) I am now. _

I don't know why you seem to hate this one shot so much. You're so good at stuff like this. I LOVE stories from a seme!Goku POV. They always kick ass.

Well I for one think this was awesome and I'm adding it to my favs. You're making me feel like a bad writer... I should update something.