So far, I like the story, but Tom's father is a muggle. As for Tom being around at this time. In the second book, Harry went back into the future when Dumbledore was head master, Tom was a student. Minerva wouldn't have been anywhere near Tom's age, I don't think. I think, from what I gather from what other people say, is that Tom was in school when Lily and James went to school.

bob

tom riddles dad was a muggle read the second book

his name Tom Marvolo Riddle

I Am Lord Voldemort

interesting, I've never read on from this view point b4

Hey, this was written before GoF ccame out. hmmm, this explains the death mark thing someone mentioned. This is a pretty good story!

This is a very interestingf story. I gotta go read the next part, is this in the past? (duh, Tricia) in parentheses is my sane side speaking. Yes, I has a very little sane side!

Cornelius Fudge, who had been unflappable in the three months he had been minister of magic. Makes NO sense... Used frantically twice in the same sentence, that doesn't work in a tense situation... Prime ministers are not "impeached"... You don't "felt miserably he had caused this", that makes no sense either... Huh? What's with the death mark? Never metioned in the books... Kind of a cute scene in NY '... Errrrr... The rest was... great, really. I'm sorry, it's highly unlikely, and makes no sense, and I hope you're not mad but this was VERY disturbing... I didn't know Dark wizards had time to... do that stuff. Read the books more carefully next time so it can be a bit more realistic, or at least not TOO out there.

Well, your poetry is messed. Apparently so was your muse, but I think I'll read chapter 2 anyway, just to avoid facing my f***ed-up life. Whoops, I said that out loud.

yay! this is good!

Nice:-) Only a correction: Voldie's father is Tom Riddle, a muggle. It says a lot in CoS...But it doesn't really matter.

eek! On the edge of my seat! *falls over.*

I've read G of F 6 times. I just love yhay book. Why did it have to end there! I can't wait 11 months for it to come out. I got into the books in March. Believe me, waiting 3 months for #4 to come out was agony. I read book 1 12 times. I need #5 to come out! God story by the way, but it was a little wrierd.

OMG! they killed the kid? that was deep.

Hmmm...interesting. I somehow can't see Minerva with Tom Riddle, but the story is well-written.

BTW, I have also read GoF a lot of times. More than five. I read it practically every day. I've read it many, many times.

Pretty good, I liked it.

Okay you asked me in our review to my store if I was physic. No I'm not physic. I got the book on the frouth, don't yell at me. All I did was walk into a store, buy the book, and leavd. The store made a mistake and I got lucky. Okay! Don't be mad, please.