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| LinziDay 2007-10-17 ch 1,  | abuseLove the ending. |
| LadyNiko 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuse*lol* Yep, this ending works best. I like how Rodney ends up taking care of John and deciding to wait on the device. Good job and I can't believe John would let his quarters get that dirty and cluttered - I figured it would be the military thing of having to keep a clean room would still be ingrained in him. :) |
| cam21 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseLOL LOL! john's room a lawsuit waiting to happen! he he he! great one shot!! |
| brenda k. 2007-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi and thanks for writing this, it's awesome, funny and sweet. I like that it shows John's vulnerability and Rodney's compassion. |
| TCB 0.5 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseA really brilliant story. I felt so sorry for both Rodney and John. And McKay truly should be sorry for what he did! Thank you for having him apologize and leaving the device behind to get it later. Nice writing. |
| sherryw 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great drabble. Thanks for writing it and I also liked the ending. It's something that you wouldn't expect from Rodney. |
| Renegade.Ranger 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseRodney was funny...poor John though, always getting sick. |
| Dr. Dredd 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, sounds like my old apartment in Pittsburgh! Some of the things in my fridge would definitely put the "eek" in "geek", too... :-) |
| EvieMay 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseLove the story, love the ending, loved it all. I laughed at how the mess in John's room seemed out to get Rodney. I can relate when crossing my 16-year-old daughters floor in the dark. Frightening! |
| Delka 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseWorks for me. |
| Autumn leaves 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! Great take on their frienship :) |
| ManicTater 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! Loved Rodney's justification of ignoring the sign, the assault of the room upon Rodney, all of John's junk, and Rodney's sympathy for John. I liked how you decided to end it. Thanks for sharing. |
| Hettie 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet story. Friends always look out for friends. Rodney might possibly know the famous daredevil's name if only because of the physics invoved in planning such spectacular stunts. Thanks for sharing. |
| Pocus 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseFun story with heartfelt friendship. I love it. I can totally empathize with trying to be sneaky and quiet while letting someone sleep. It does seem like everything in the room jumps in your way. |
| LdyAnne 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was nice ;-) I loved how Rodney got all protective and wanted to help out John. |