WRITE MORE!

Verry nice work here! I loves it =)
Take a peek at mine if you don't mind
'Crimson Moonlight'
Update real soon!

tht's sad
but i helped yu get the idea for when Angel woke up! yay!
yu used it!
=]
lmao
good chapter...i wonder what happens next

I sware to god if you don't update I will scream!

Great job so far. Although I wish the men didn't rape Angel. Please don't discontinue your story. Update soon, very soon. :)

I love your story. And Jesse is such a sweetheart. I would love to have him as a boyfriend. please update ASAP.

o_O
wats happens next!

update! update! update!

OMG THAT IS FABULOUS!

oh heyy...tht was short...but cute..update soon! i duner what Angel has planned...

sorry for writing such long reviews

please write more, it's to suspenseful. i realy want to read the rest. ok i'll get on with the "reviewing" um... i love how u switch the narroration arround. it adds to the suspence and makes the story better. also some par. aren't very important, i think i talked about it in the earlier chapters that i reviewed.( i use different "names" for each review, sorry, i'll just stick with theresa from now on.) soo please write more

i can't believe ur dedicating ch.18 to ur grandmother that's really disturbing. i'm sorry but this story is really perverted and i'm not goind 2 read anymore.

"i was being raped" OMG OMG i was laughing so hard when i read that, i'm sorry it was just so funny.

this story is so intense i'm scared to read on, but don't worry i will, the story is to good. you better make this story have i happy ending! if u do i'll review like 10 billion times!