this is a great story she has no right to copy it copy one of her stories and make her see wha it feels like dont let it get u down becases ur a great writer love blossom-chan ^_^

Hey Jenny great fic and don't worry about SasuHina, I'm sure she's getting "yelled at" by your fans. Anyway keep up the good work!

yeah!! great!

Welcome to the i-hate-slutty-**-who-make-Saku-Chan-Hina-Chan-Ten-Chan-and-Ino-Chan-cry-created-by-insane-hyper-people! Sorry my Nee-Chan and I came up with that. And yes i have had a LOT of sugar! Now on to why im writing this...urm... Nee-Chan, Gaara-Chan, Itachi-Kun...

All three-Your writing this to review the story.

OH! Right! Great Story!! The slapping of the ** was AWESOME! I fell off my bed in its awesomeness!

Itachi- That was because you had too much sugar

WELL THANKS MR. IM SO COOL EVEN THOUGH IM ACTUALLY NOT!

Well, I did fall off the bed thanks to your story too -sticks tongue out at Itachi-

Itachi- I'm off to go kill the bastard who was flirting with you and his ENTIRE family

NO! DONT HURT SEIJI-KUN! STUPID HANDSOME MANGEKYOU POSSESSING POSSESSIVE BASTARD! GET YOUR PERFECT ** BACK HERE! ISNT THE UCHIHA CLAN ENOUGH!!

Kami-Sama!! He did the same thing with Shisui and the Uchiha Clan! (IM SO SAD NOW!! I MADE SASU-KUN-TEME LEAVE SAKU-CHAN AND MADE HER SAD! PLEASE EVERYBODY DONT HATE ME!)

Gotta go stop Itachi-Kun-Teme! Later! Keep Up The Great Work!!

Sayonar- ITACHI! YAMERO! SHANNERO(sp?)!! SAKU-CHAN HELP MEE!

Sayonara,
BP-Chan (I hate my bf ((Yes he is mine!MWAHAHAHAHA)

okay.. really?
thats so mean :[
i wont read it :]
one.. i hate sasuhina ;]
two.. i never liked copiers :]

hey jenny, good job, great stuff! love the sasusaku pairing!
great imagination, i like the gaara's trunks part!
[p/s: i'm a fan of gaara n kakashi!]

I loved it. I got confused in a few parts though... Over all, lovely and good plot.

well i'm glad that you're not mad at her, but i don't like it what she did; she kinda reminds me of fangirls:P
but seriously if hers is a hinataxsasuke then i won't even look at it, first cuz i think that's the worst couple and second it's mean of her to steal your story. all i can say to you is that you're the one who actually wrote it so be proud of it and never let anyone get to you(wow i sound like a mom:S)
anyways, i really had a lot of fun reading your story especially your conversations with the naruto characters and the fact that you yourself was in it. do you have more story's? i'm going to check now on your account and maybe i'll read them too^^ again such a long review from me, what;s wrong with me?!D:

i love sasuhina but what she did was wrong.
so that ** basically stole your story.
they are exactly the same.
and i like yours better because its the ORIGINAL.

Aww ... hey ,, dunch b sad luhh .. Peeps copied ur work cause its veri well done .. Peeps wouldnt wana copy ur work if it is bad .. Too bad i dunch like sasuhina .. I lurbe SASUSAKU better !! =) Just continue writing !! Update update kayyes ?!?! =D Cheer up !! xP

don't mind that F*ing person. She is just jeleaous that u can make all these awesome stories. She probably has no talent so thats why she copies ppls work. I bet a lot of ppl noe this is the original ( at least I do.) plus sasuhina is such a BAD couple. Hinata iss way too shy to even hug sasuke let alone KISS him. God...no offence to ppl who like sasuhina but SASUSAKU is SO much better. They r way cuter together anywayz.

Hope that dude can live with herself.
xoxo pinkprincess0211

COPY? I know I'm not a good writer but Even I don't copy!

I hate people that take credit for other's work. Actually. I visited SasuHina's profile, and surprisingly, all her work is copied.

Yup, I remember/know each and every one of those stories she 'wrote' but instead of Hinata, Sakura was the main character. And I actually found this in her reviews section for one of 'her' stories, First Date (which is copied, I've read the same fic, lol sadly, I have no life and read SasuxSaku fics all day) if you look at the reviews, there'll be about three pointing out that she 'wrote' green eyes instead of Hianta's lavender eyes. So yeah...

Is there some sort of report button for her or something? I mean, copying 1 fiction is common, but all of her stories she has 'written herself' are all copies of SasuxSaku fics >_< Arg! Reading the reviews ** me off like no other because they all said, "love it!" or "Great story!" thus, giving her the credit and stuff.

Anyways, I should start studying now, I have a big test tomorrow, and I shouldn't be on the internet expressing my anger! =P Hehe! Sorry if that was a block load of writing to read through!
Anyways, yeah, someone (me? if I can find the button) should report her for taking credit for other's stories!
Ah! Look at the time!
Must study! ^^;; Bai bai!
From another SasuxSaku fan (SASUXSAKU FOR LIFE! XD)
- BelieveForMe, aka Jen.

Oh hell no! AIN'T NO ONE GOING TO COPY A SASUSAKU STORY AND CHANGE IT INTO A NONEXSISTANT COUPLE! SasuHina?! WTF! This story's too good to be a SasuHina anyways ;P. I'm not reading that story because its SasuHina and WILL upset me a bit. So don't let it get you too upset, confront the person about it :) Yeah, I know I'm REAL protective about SasuSaku. I love it. So I applaud you on making the ORIGINAL story, and who knows? Maybe that author knows what they're doing is wrong :) I hope everything will turn out okay :)

AW...kawaii desu ne. Keep up your good work!