cool!

SUPER CHAP!^^ Soory I never know what to say^^°
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Nice story, love seeing shanks as a kid. Update sooner...or else I will leave a horrid review next time. JK. good writing but try to include more in the story than just dialouge.

Uryuu, short, but well written :3
I love the reference to Maes Hughes.
Maybe, you can pull it off, and create the first OP CharacterxOC pairing that I have EVER LIKED! :o
Good job, Soro-chan! Keep up the good work!

Interesting story!! You gonna finish it?

Very interesting. Shanks is one of my favourite characters, and I often wonder about his past. I'm too lazy to write my own story about it though, so I'll just keep reading yours. ^_^ I look forward to seeing where you take it.

YAY! You are going to continue it, right, Ha-chan? Right? Right?

Hi =)
A story of Shanks as an kid... CUTE! Go on! I hope you write soon more ^^

I don't think I've ever seen something with kid-Shanks before. Cool!

Lol, pretty good so far! Poor lil Shanks! =) but, it might be worth mentioning that it has already been revealed in the manga that Shanks is from the West Blue. But, I like your description of this South Blue town. =D