 darkakane 2009-10-12 . chapter 1HILARIOUS! I couldn't stop laughing! |
 Verasque 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Haha! This is great and incredibly witty ;) Loved it! |
 Amrun 2009-06-24 . chapter 1This was quite cute. It doesn't really have a lot of substance, but it was definitely an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. |
 abyssgirl 2009-01-28 . chapter 1Oh, I love this! Please write more like this! *begs* |
 elf warrior princess 2009-01-18 . chapter 1hahahha this is fantastic. very out of character for page alan and an instructor, but sometimes we need such things. :-) |
 Merkaba7734 2008-12-30 . chapter 1Man slave? Should have The Talk with Duke Gareth... priceless. And the father coments... Very nice way for Alanna to get out of it. "Who holds the power now, minstrel?" Hilarious! And extra hours of etiquette is better? Anyway, great story, it made my day. |
 KrisEleven 2008-12-24 . chapter 1This was very, very funny. I liked it!
KrisEleven~ |
 Sera dy Relandrant 2008-06-04 . chapter 1So even etiquette is preferable to music? Lol, hilarious! |
 Dom's Lover 2008-05-09 . chapter 1 Delightful. I haven't glanced at fanfiction in over a year, and spent the last half hour wading through messes of terrible stuff (this genre needs some new writers, btw) when I stumbled upon this little gem. Wonderful characterization, divine wit, I would kiss you if I could! |
 seekerchick06 2008-03-17 . chapter 1Oh jeezus! That was hilarious! |
 Infallible.Mirage 2008-01-26 . chapter 1My poor stomach...funniest diary ever. |
 Musical Kat 2007-10-23 . chapter 1That was... odd. But difinetely unique and quite funny. A very different thing than i would have expected. I would love to see more stories like this. So if you write more I at least will review. Keep up the good work. |
 LadyLinn 2007-03-28 . chapter 1That was really cute. I love it!
"I did not practise today; I worked on my archery instead. Such skills will one day save my life in battle. I don’t think the enemy will pause mid-blow if I ask him to wait while I recite a poem of friendship and brotherly love." --This was favorite part because it's so true.
Good Job!
~Linn |
 Heather (no account) 2007-02-28 . chapter 1 Wow! You should write more stories like this. It was very amusing, and if it weren't so late, I would've laughed until I almost died. |
 Andrea Rimsky 2007-02-25 . chapter 1So I was depressed today over my own attempts at music, and wandered onto in the hopes of finding something to cheer me up. Alas, only Kel/Neal fluff and modern world Mary Sues.
But then, as I had begun to despair, I find this!
I think I like Davesson even better than Volney Rain. |