Gotta love your stories, really. This one was very well-written and poignant- and gods did you shock me when you killed Sheppard )= But it was truly well-written! You're a genius with words- but I knew that already, otherwise you wouldn't be on my favourites' list (-;. So great great job! I loved it.

Oh wow. I loved this story. Just knew Sheppard was going to clock alt-Sheppard after he almost let Rodney get killed. o3o

Very well done and I like how you did a little Epi for both universes though I must admit sadness at the fact that alt-Rodney's not back on alt-Sheppard's team. TT^TT Sorry Zelenka.

Also, as an aside, it threw me a bit occastionally how there were no breaks of any kind before switches places/perspectives. IE: Going from Sheppard & Rodney to Teyla somewhere else to alt-Sheppard/Rodney yet again somewhere else. A little "-" or something would be nice. ^_^b Noticed that a bit in a few of your stories so I think I'm getting used to it, but thought I'd mention it just the same.

So far I'm really enjoying this. There is one mistake however, the book Apocalypse Now is based on, Heart of Darkness is required reading in Canadian Highschools.

What a wonderful story. I am amazed at how you managed to juggle all the different story lines, not to mention two sets of the same characters. Thanks for giving me many nights of reading pleasure!

Awesome, just awesome! Once I started this story I could not stop! You have an amazing talent and this story was brilliant! Thank you for sharing!

What an intriguing AU McKay. There is enough of the original in him to be drawn to him but with an added bitterness and sadness which is painful.

What an amazing first chapter. And so satisfyingly long. I can't emphasise enough how refreshing that is!

Wow! I've just finished your wonderful story and I must say you were very brave to tackle such a theme as an AU. It came off very well and it was good to see our boys get home safely and the AU boys get back to friendlier relationships.

Okay, whew! Time travel saves the day! This story was quite a bit different from your usual, but it was a clever way to "bring back" Carson and have an engaging adventure at the same time. The conflicted alternates (or not-alts, as you have written them) of the characters were really fascinating. Makes me wonder what an actual episode dealing with alternative versions of the entire team would highlight. The action sequences were very well done. The shoot-'em-up parts of stories are always my favorite and yours are, of course, wonderful.

*freaks out* It takes a brave person to kill both Teyla and Sheppard in a single chapter. How incredible to bring so much meaning to John's untimely demise, and Teyla's as well.

Reading on (better late than never)...

You're one hell of a storyteller. This was just fantastic.

Very nice!! ^^

"But he also found a small device a few inches across, obviously Ancient. When he held it in his palm, he felt the familiar tug of activation, a quick glimmering across a corner of his mind."

Er...I'm sure someone else has pointed this out by now, but...ATA, not working in AU? Your idea, girl! And a little more problematic than the wrong color uniform... Still LOVING the story, though! ^^

Love the lighthearted ending to this Chap! Definitely needed, here in emo!Atlantis... =D

"He *liked* this McKay" ^^ Another fan won over... ;D