Wow...the end *shivers* Wonderful...yet frightening. I adore the whole "delivery" thing, no matter how predictable. And I still love the way you always portray yoda.

Priceless.

So on my favorites.

Hey, I just finished this, and I'm honored to say that it's one of the most poetic things I've read in a while. Your language flows smoothly from Obi-Wan's thoughts to Qui-Gon's letters and back. It's seemless and you can feel the genuine emotions seeping off the page. I wish there was more! It's beautiful. Beautiful. Please, for the love of all things slashy and Jedi, keep writing! The world needs more people like you. Love and kisses!

OH that was beautiful! ALl of it!

I can't stop smiling!

that was sick.

Awesome!

Wow... bravo. More like this, please! *s* I loved all 3 chapters.

This is actually the first slash i have ever read. I liked it, it had feeling. I could really tell how much Qui-Gon loved Obi-Wan.