:D That's great. I'm studying Romeo and Juliet in school right now, so I was all like 'parallel, parallel, parallel, analyze, analyze, analyze'. *grins*

ACK! I had the same idea...it grew out of an English project. ;-) But it appears you got to it first, and quite well-done at that. I'm not really a slash fan, but I thought the entire fic was very good and true to the original play. I'll probably post my R&J version anyway, if I can ever finish it...iambic pentameter is hell to write in! ;-) (But if you do it for long enough, you start THINKING in it, and the whole "thee" and "thou" thing...then people start to give you funny looks.)