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Reviews For: This Is Absolution - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

JenniferC77
2008-09-21
ch 14,
abuseGosh, you sure don't disappoint. This was fantastic. You write tension very, very well. And, you do a wonderful job of charging it with subtle sexuality. I can't wait to see how this turns out! Jenn.
Private Eye4u
2008-09-12
ch 14,
abuseWow this chapter actually had me break out a sweat. I can't help but love chases dark side in this story along with all the possessiveness (lol). Excited the whole chase and claudia relationship is back in the game...can't wait to read more!
darkmagus110475
2008-09-11
ch 13,
abuseRead both your fanfics take on the Covenant. Got to admit this is a nice take on the relationship of the main characters. Wouldn't take Kate to be a Seeker/magic-user. Wonder how the Sons didn't sense her as a power-user? Seems they're not sensitive to other power-users except their own. Where's the rest of it? I'm itching to read the rest. Just for the record though, what kind of power-users are Seekers?
Lil Kitsune-chan
2008-09-04
ch 1,
abuseOh I just love this fic of yours! You're the first person that has been able to make me read on and on a fic that isn't slash! I just love your OC, I also love the relationship Chase has with her. I think you're the only person that has written something so divine and so the Covenant in like forever! Please update my dear I'll love to read more of this amazing fic of yours.

Best wishes from lil k
JenniferC77
2008-08-30
ch 13,
abuseThis is still really interesting...I'm glad that Claudia and Chase are finally back together! Jenn.
ireland01
2008-08-16
ch 13,
abuseThis is one of the best stories ever!! I love the Claudia/Chase relationship. I like seeing him like this!! Please update soon! PLEASE!
Unique Black Beauty
2008-07-09
ch 13,
abusei love your story. Its orginal. Is Claudia and Chase going back to Ispwich? Will they meet the Sons? So many question i have. My mind is reling from the way you been writing you story. Its exciting and unexpecting. Update soon!
Babaksmiles
2008-06-30
ch 13,
abusehave I told you lately how much I adore you?? I am so happy you finally updated!
I missed Claudia so much. I love how she comes in and even though she hasn't seen Chase in a long time, she still gives him attitude when he screws up! I love it.
Favorite line: Claudia scoffed, “Are you serious? That’s the most ridiculous thing I’ve ever heard. No, I don’t want a ** castle—“ lol. that was priceless. I love how Chase is so in love with Claudia that he wants to buy her the world and I love how she puts him in his place. She is so real.
It will be interesting to see Chase's friends' reaction to her, I mean they will defintely think she's beautiful but I hope they don't give her a hard time because of the color of her skin. Not that I think Chase would ever let anyone disrespect her.
I wonder if Karen will have a bigger role in your story? It was very interesting how you added her in to show her sorrow at her loss but you could also have a surprise in store for us so I am really interested to see where you take this.
And this killer in Ipswich, I wonder if he is related to the Torres sisters and is taking body parts for the spell at the end.
God I love your story!! Please update soon!
Hugs!
Babak
ChelsieMarie
2008-04-26
ch 12,
abuseI'm so glad that you updated! I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens when Chase and Claudia see each other. :)
JenniferC77
2008-04-04
ch 11,
abuseThis is such a great story...I fell in love with Proof of Life and am so happy that you continued the story. I can't wait to see Claudia and Chase reunited. I hope you come back soon! Jenn.
Gabwr
2008-02-06
ch 11,
abuseGreat chapter. I like that Tyler is being the most mature about everything. Sorry about the late reveiw. I'm just now getting everything back up to speed after dealing with 2 deaths in my family. I look forward to reading more.
ChelsieMarie
2008-01-23
ch 11,
abuseI love your story! It's a good as the first if not getting better! I noticed it's been a while since you've updated, I hope that doesn't mean you've given up on the story. It's really good. Fingers crossed that you'll update:)
Knox-Out-Baby
2008-01-01
ch 11,
abuseI've spent the day reading your stories. I have to say they have to be some of the best Covenant fics I've read.

Great character development by the way. The movie itself left me wanting.
Babaksmiles
2007-12-07
ch 11,
abuse*blowing kisses to you*...thank you so much for the update, it was exactly what I needed to take a break from exam studying!!
You cannot give up writing this story, I need to know everything, what will happen to the boys, will Claudia and Chase relationship last, will they get married, have kids (I know you hinted at all the ideas you had planned for them in your PM to me so don't worry, I will always be around to read this fabulous story!!)
I love how indepth you are going about Caleb's insecurities because it's funny that we just assumed as the oldest, he has to be the leader, when in reality, I kind of feel like Tyler is being the most mature about everything and being really level-headed about wanting to talk with Chase...he's a cutie..does he get a girl as well? I love the ethnicity you throw into this story so if he does get a girl, let's make her an olive-skinned brunette...*wink*. Well I guess when they are reunited, technically Chase will be the leader since he's the oldest and strongest!
The boys are going to be shocked when they find out about their horrid past...and they are going to be shocked to find out that there are others with supreme powers and Claudia is pretty darn powerful!
Oh I miss Chase and Claudia, I am so happy they are going to be in the next chapter!! Will she be visiting him soon?
Gorman is interesting because I am still trying to guess what his role is in all of this...
Well I know you said you struggled with writing this chapter but let me tell you, it was fabulous! I think there is a nice flow to your story and you characters are very well developed!
If you ever feel like bouncing off an idea or getting me to re-read something for you, just let me know, I would be happy to!!
Hugs,
Babak
Gabwr
2007-09-21
ch 10,
abuseGreat chapter. Chase still has a few anger problems it looks like. Looking forward to reading more.
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