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| natilubby 2008-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseOMG! first fic I read that Chloe dies. so sad! he should have saved Chloe, not Audrey :/ Chloe's the one who helps him everytime he needs, not audrey. anyway... I like the fic |
| Tigerlily Brown 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseAww! *sniff* That made me cry. |
| Hanz the Bunny 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseNO! bring her back! she's not supposed to die! humph. oh well. it was still a great story - even though she shouldn't have died. bah. but i digress. it was very well written and you got all the characters perfectly! good job |
| KatLilly86 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseHeart wrenching. I could actually see something like this happening though. Jack only finally realizing how important she is in a situation like this. |
| sej1986 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseAw thanks everyone :) I'm glad you liked it! I'm sorry I made people cry though! It made me cry when I wrote it. I tried to stay close to the characters and I'm glad that came across. I hope to write loads more and I promise they won't all be sad :D Jessie611- I thought of that too, something like this could happen. I hope to God the writers don't ever put Jack in a situation like that, I don't think I could forgive them! |
| Vadergirl2006 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWhy are u people so hell bent on making me cry with these sweet Jack/Chloe stories where one of them dies!! Why? There great stories as was yours. But they make me cry. I guess that makes u a great writer. :) |
| happyhooligan2001 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was intense but Chloe would always do what's right and do her duty to the bitter end. |
| Copper Hikari 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseaw. Chloe's all about her job, even until the end. Excellent job. |
| Crashxin2xMe 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh! that made me cry! thats so sad. but really, it was well written! great job. |
| Jessie611 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuse*wipes tears from eyes*. That was so good. And very true to the show. I can so see something like this happening, as much as I hope it doesn't. But the J/C relationship is certainly one that sits well with the phrase 'you don't know what you've got til it's gone'. Love & betrayal go hand in hand! :) |