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| ImSoMMAD 2007-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseThat was incredible. And I loved every word. I can say honestly that there wasn't word I could change, and that's saying a lot! It's beautiful just as it is, and the struggle he had to find the words was just gorgeous. Please, write again soon! xxStellaxx |
| beMMADfabulous 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuse*happy sigh* Aww, that was so sweet! It seemed really possible with the story line. :D Loved it! |
| Thara June 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseSweet ... When does it take place? |
| OSUSprinks 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. Just what I needed after a horrible week! |
| jayejaye78 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. You have Minerva's character down perfectly and I love the image of her swaying as he kissed her. A great fic hon... Jaye :-) |
| MoreThanACrush 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWel I loved it! It was really cute, and I loved how you just placed yourself in his shoes for a breif moment to check out what you think he would be thinking. I like it. I was reading the big paragraph again in your story, and I was trying to figure how to make it easier to read.. maybe you could make them into clearer sentences I suppose. Oh, I don't know. lol. Again, absolutely fabby! Love Cody* |
| Aleta 2007-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this. I hope that you continue writing. I really enjoyed how he saw her refelection and already knew who she would feel. |