Well, this was short, but interesting. The vision of the two brothers--especially from their father's vantage point--clamoring for Tak's attention, was adorably hilarious. I enjoyed the background on how Keisuke and Ryousuke grew up together. What I found especially thought provoking what the central theme of it: "Synchronicity." That they'd always gone after the same thing, and that this trait held true in their love interest, opens a great deal many doors for the imagination. I've always like the idea of a fanfiction wherein Keisuke's after Tak, Ryousuke's after Tak, and Tak is utterly clueless XD.
Awesome job! I had a lot of fun reading this.
Oh, and I've added this to the community "Initial Slash," since it rocks and I want to share it with all the people who'll think it rocks, too.

Lol.. This one was fun ^_^

It's 1:40 in the morning over here, thus, I could not laugh very loudly for fear of waking everyone up. In order to prevent this, I know have some very obvious teeth marks on my arm...and I was wearing a long=sleeves too...

This was so good! A look at their relationship/interaction form an outsider's point of view - thei FATHER'S no less! That was so great...really entertaining!

And I personally like the ending. I thought it was a brilliant stroke of genius, and hilarity!

So, would you be intersted in writing a Ryousuke/Takumi fic, or even a Keisuke/Takumi one? I really love those two pairings and, well, this fandom really isn't big enough. Plus, I really like your writing style, I think it's excellent.

Nicely written.

*grins* you KIDDING? THAT WAS AWESOME! ^^ Can you update it? Hm? Hm? Please?? There aren't enough Takumi/Ryousuke fics out there. Good ones at least. And this is well-written, to boot! T-T Please update? *puppy dog eyes*

Omiai - traditional arranged matchmaking meetings

there... as for the story, it carries an interesting idea...

Heh, parents are more observant than you think. Nice fic ^^

:3 I really liked how this was written, in the father's perspective and the insight that an outsider's eyes gives us. The ending especially was awesome and all of the expectations put on Ryousuke made me feel for him. Wonderful story!

Hi I thought your story was well written and I like the insights. I agree. Could you tell us what an Ominai is? Cheers!

I like this fic... will you be continuing it? There's so much possibilities. =) Also, can you please kindly explain the actual meaning of "omiai"? I'm hazaardng a guess given the context, but it'll be appreciated if you can explain it. Thanks.