I like I hope u update soon.

0-0 Why hasn't this story been updated in over a year? Its great! I hope you update in the near future because this story has really caught my interest. Especially as I suck at making RoxasXOC stories so this was very noice. :3

Wow! This is a really good story! Even though the Characters are a LITTLE OOC, That's FINE! Keep up the good work!

Please! please! please! Please, countinue your story! I really like it. Hehehe! Roxas is in for a shock!

I love it hurry with the next chapter

Eh? What does Leon owe Kaito for? Is Kaito the one that wrote that article? Will you update soon please? D:

Nya! Lovely chapter, I really really really like this story so please please please please update! Did I please enough?

Gosh, I really love your story! It just seems... I dunno know how to describe it.

I love Kaito's originality, especially since she has an air that shows she has to work for what she has. That gives the story some reality. And plus, it causes a twist because I can already tell she's multi-talented. She talks of Drama, Art and other things as well. Roxas isn't thinking about those things when he claims that she'll be his next girlfriend which, for some fan-girly reason, makes me giggle. I also simply love Roxas and I have to say you portray him beautifully.

Thank you very much for sharing your story and I hope you continue it in the future.

heh i like this story!

although i have 1 question; what is asexual?

i think that kaito won't be that easy going with roxas. anyway we'll see!

don't forget to update soon!

keep up!

xx

Ha! Kaito sounds fun! Leon does seem a little OOC but that's okay because it's your fic and you can do whatever you want to with it. I admit that my characters in my stories may be just a little bit OOC too. Heh. Oh, well, creative license and all that. I really am enjoying this. It does make me a little angry that the girls are sterotyped because I am a girl and I can't stand how much people stereotype girls and their capabilities. That's partly why I like Kaito as much as I do. The only thing that seems a little bit out of character to me about her is that if she was the one to write the article than why does her personality seem so much more different in real life? In the article, the writer seems very hyper and acts as though she's the cat who ate the canary and Kaito seems like she would only act that way around people that she knows and trusts- like Leon. She does sound like she would be a fun person to hang around with. It's so sad that you don't get more reviews for this because it is a pretty good fic and you are a very good writer but that's what happens when an OC is introduced to the fic. I like OC fics sometimes. Not all the time and as long as they're well done fics. Your's fall in this category. Good luck with the next chapter and I shall wait patiently for an update. I know how it is to not update for a while. I haven't updated in over a month on two of my fics. Ugh. Bad me. But inspiration will come only when inspiration comes. I am sorry to hear (or read I suppose) that you have lost interest with this story and are trying to get it done as quickly as possible. That seems a bit sad because it is a good fic and I think you're doing a wonderful job on it. But a writer has interest where a writer has interest and the reader can do nothing else about it. Until next time... Keep Writing!

Hiya.

I've been reading your series for a while now. And I love it.

I've never really written a review before, so you're my first!

I really hope you'll update soon, because I'll be waiting

And, don't feel too bad about not updating. You can fix that. _

LOL Sora's been funny in this one, Riku too with his all mighty clingy thing. Leon's kewl in this story though, keeping his calm and stuff. now i really wanna meet Kaito, and see what happens! Roxas and Kaito's adventure, with everyone helpin in the background. and Leon holds an interesting part in this story too.

hehe sorry i haven't reviewed, i've read your story but i've been so busy with school, friends, move and everything that i haven't gotten much time. _

but this is still a great story, and funny! lol keep it up!

lol, you got the name right, but it's backwards. but then again, NightRayne92 sounds cool too so it's okay! aw i'm glad to help you update this. i'm wondering about the first part, about the girl and squal/leon. To see what's they're relationship you know? to see what that girl doesn't want squall/leon to become... oh! and i look up the difinition of Kaito and it means 'kite'... but depending on the spelling then it can mean something different. but now i'm wondering why leon's surprise and what does Kaito have! *grins* it's exciting! down there... there's no down arrow... but down there *points down with hand that you can't see* is a site with jap/english translation.

but the one i use to find kaito is the one down there *points down again*

okies, good chapter! i'll be waiting for an update soon, whenever you can. i'm paitient (sp?) lol...

oh i wanna see/read what's next! it's interesting to see who this girl is and if Roxas can do the challenge! but i have a quick quiestion... i don't really understand the challenge that much *sweatdrop* so Roxas has to date girls that excel in only ONE area for a whole year? but he can break up and date other girls that excels in one area right? But if a girl that excels in multi area catches his eye then he's stuck with her for one whole year, no break ups no 2 timing with others and everything, right?

I like this so far, please continue!

Thanks! 3