can you please update?i love this story!

interesting fic here -w-

vaati!
vaati is so cool!
D: I wish to know the english grammar D: i want to put one of my fics in the english section xD!
in the spanish section i'm very well XD!!
if you can, go to my page, if you can understand spanish xD!!

see you!

So good! I can't get enough! more!

I am not a part of this site but this is an awsome story.

creepy, so the guy has an Ocarina, AND he knows all of the songs? Weird... Awwe, Zelda and Link ^_^ lol. Great chapter!

Wonderful story. Very exciting:)

An interesting story indeed. Very impresive and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Signed:
King_Ganondorf

Heyy! This is SquirtSapphire from dA! ^_^ Anyways.. I really like this first chapter, it sounds like it will definately be interesting! I can't wait to read more!

Very nice to be your first chapter... some grammar mistakes but its very nice... I looked at your pen name and I wonder... Is it you?

wow! this is a great story... your pen name is princess rita of hyrule... does it mean its you?