 Teal Phoenix 2009-10-16 . chapter 1*howls with laughter* Bakura the germaphobe, what'll you think of next? |
 Mors Mortis Angelus 2009-07-19 . chapter 13will marik and malik ever get back together? so sad, especially the last few chapters...i love this! |
 Pendulum666 2009-03-13 . chapter 13Wow. Found this story and couldn't stop reading! You have an amazing talent, I love how you showed bits of their past life together. It was a really intriguing story! All in all, amazing job! |
 darkyaoiwriter 2008-11-03 . chapter 1nice story |
 Foxfire32 2008-10-24 . chapter 12I love this Story |
 Paradocs 2008-10-09 . chapter 13O.O
That was amazing! I loved how you made Yami be such a total ass; it fit him. I can't wait to read Wilted Rose.
And poor Marik and Malik! TT-TT |
 Lolchen 2008-08-27 . chapter 13Aw, so cute! How destructive their love is, Malik and Marik's... and they don't know, sadly. I like tendershipping as much as bronzeshipping, so I would appreciated it, if you had deepened their relation a little more, as it is rather shallow at the moment (even though Bakura tries to get to heaven for him, it's just a little absurd after the little what happened between them). I really thought Ryou would have had a sissy fit once realizing Bakura was bewitched as well! He took it too calmly for my liking... I think I'm going to read Wilted Rose sometime then, am interested what'll happen after all ^^
mfG
Lolchen |
 mystralwind 2008-01-18 . chapter 12Omg! Theres no last chapter.. Oh but you have another story that follows this one.. yea.
I hope Malik and Marik can live together. If Seto went to see Pegasus (I really don't like him), then maybe he was given another pearl? Could that be why Seto tested him?
I hope you let Ryou be just long enough to give Bakura someone to love. |
 mystralwind 2008-01-18 . chapter 11Ah, Friki'n A NO! Malik!
Dude, I'm like almost in tears. Poor Malik and Marik.
Now Ryou has no reason to stick around either.. WA !! Poor Bakura.
I hope Yami burns so Seto can punk him up every night. |
 mystralwind 2008-01-18 . chapter 9NO!! Ryou, punch Yami in his stupid face!
Warn Malik, he's mart. He will realize you are telling the truth.. After he head butts you..lol Poor Ryou, he's in a bad spot. |
 mystralwind 2008-01-17 . chapter 8In ch 6, Yami is an A$$. Poor Malik, and Ryou are just pawns for his revenge. Just how is he an angel again?
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I still say Poor Ryou, he's a pawn. He and Malik may have gotten along if not for Yami.. Thistle headed Jerk.. ROFL
I'm really enjoying this story. It's even got me fuming at all the right parts.. LOL |
 mystralwind 2008-01-17 . chapter 7Wow, it seems like Ryou would have asked along the lines of.. "oh, I'm sorry. You two seemed so close; have you known each other long?" I just figured he'd do some research on his enemy before proceeding to interfere directly. Poor Ryou will hurt himself and Bakura.
And Little Malik will hurt Ryou.. oh no! LOL |
 mystralwind 2008-01-17 . chapter 5NO! Ryou, don't be dumb!! Leave Malik alone. LOL ( the precious!! LOL)
Ryou is so NOT fat!! He's super thin. Bakura could probably pick him up over his shoulder, no sweat.. I hope he does..lol
I love these 4 in any combination. Great read so far. I know you said to comment @ every chapter but since you wrote it a while back, I didn't think you'd mind. |
 Gnos fo Ytinrete 2007-11-24 . chapter 13I am currently very upset with you. Ack the sadness. So dramatic. Silly, stupid Malik.
Ja ne.
Liliana |
 Goddess of the Black Moon 2007-11-24 . chapter 13*is sobbing her eyes out* I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY I DIDN'T KNOW YOU UPDATED!! BUT I AM SO GLAD I LOOKED AT MY REVIEWS STATS BECAUSE NOW I'VE FINISHED READING YOUR FIC AND I DON'T THINK I'VE EVER CRIED HARDER IN MY LIFE!! Oh god oh god oh god Malik NO! His voice is gone?!?
how ... very Little Mermaid. XD
AND NOW HE'S DOOMED TO DIE AGAIN! NO! I hope the sequel has a happy ending ... if not I'll pull a Marik and commit mental suicide!! (cause I might have a test the next day ... X3) |