Oho! This is FUNNY! I applaud you on sarcastic wit! I LOVE this! Can't wait till you update!

I like this chapter better because, well, there actually WAS a chapter (hehee) I mean, a lot more writing! I kinda like where this is going but I don't think Willy would really just decide to invite people to the factory for fun. That sounds more like an idea that Charlie would have. I hope Willy doesnt go inviting all women from like a list he has of old school mates or something, that would be silly. Wait, you mentioned a phone book. Perhaps it would be better if he ran his finger down the page and just landed on people that he in no way knows lol. Oh I don't know.. I like where your fic could go but I'm not sure if I like where it is going (guess i'll have to find out if I do or not, huh?). You are a good writer though and have a very good grip on Willy's personality. Quirky and sarcastic, just the way I like him! I look forward to your update.

nice chapter

Well, this is a very good start to what could possibly become a very, very good fanfic. I REALLY hope you are gonna see it through!

LOVE IT! I can't wait till you get further into it!

~Rhia~