Reviews for What Thrives Beneath

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Sarchale 2008-04-24 ch 6, anon.	abuseNO! Don't you dare! I shall hunt you down and drag you back to your computer while making you do another myself! GET BACK THEIR AND WRITE A SEQUAL! (sp?) YOU ARE EVIL! ARGGH!
Rena Redhead 2008-03-16 ch 6,	abuseThe end to a very interesting and intense story. And I feel like a complete jerk for not reviewing it sooner. Sorry. So much going on it's not healthy for me. Anyways, I really enjoyed this. It really did tap into a seperate realm of feelings for Robin. The type that you never want to admit because they feel so horribly true. And to think how this relates to Slade too. It's like their postions in life have just made them almost physically ill as well as emotionally and mentally. A very hard subject to portray indeed, but I think you came across it in a very unique and interesting way. Overall, great job! I look forward to your future fics! Stay Cool! ~Rena
dlsky 2008-02-13 ch 6,	abuseA fine ending to a fine chapter. I'm glad you finally finished it up and would be very happy to see a full (storyline) Fan fiction follow in it's theme. I'm interested if that earlier disucussion we had about a storyline is what you think might be good to incorporate it into, or if you are planning a whole new set and means of chapter content? Still, whatever you do, I'll see about reading and following you down the chapter posting ride. Thanks for sharing, dlsky
Balance in the Dark 2008-01-19 ch 2,	abuseOk honestly? I kinda skimmed some of the beginning…Sorry. I do that sometimes but I did like Robin’s thoughts that he is falling to his death the same as his parents…now ‘that’ was clever. I have never thought about that before now. Bravo. BITD
Balance in the Dark 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseOkay, well…I think a lot of what you wrote on here was pretty good. Some parts I really liked and other thought’s seemed kinda stray. It was kinda odd reading it but enjoyable none-the-less. BITD
iLoVeMoOnYnPaDfOoT 2008-01-08 ch 5,	abuseaw so good!
iLoVeMoOnYnPaDfOoT 2008-01-08 ch 4,	abuseaw
iLoVeMoOnYnPaDfOoT 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseomg! i'm not usally one for cartoon fic.s- i have manily been obessing over books n such but... this ruled soo much! im only on the first chap. n i love it aloready :)
Rena Redhead 2007-06-25 ch 5,	abuseVery interesting. I think it's very natural for Slade to want a family. And your line for Robin when he said 'It must kill you to know that what you want you can never have'. It fit so well. I liked how you incorperated Slade's past into it too. I think what was very apparent was that Slade seemed to really believe that, no matter what Robin might actually want or feel, Robin wants him to be his father figure. And without realizing it fully, he's almost believing that because Slade wants that second chance. Excellent job! Update soon! Later! ~Rena
dlsky 2007-06-21 ch 5,	abuseThat was quite the chapter you wrote. I belive this is a thorn in the side of both Robin and Slade that several observers and fans have seen in them both, that need, that similarity, how they both complete each other and how they even in diffrence complete and roundout the circle, fill in the missing pieces and how it is truely sad that they are segrigated to be on opposit sides from one another simply because the world, their comrads and friends would not allow them to just be. How Robin's hesitency; his needs so great that he suffers for saying "no" to Slade's offer, but his need is forced into answering no by Batman's restictions and rules for him, his influence over him. And then Slade! That desire has restictions in it that his selfish purfect desire of a catagory of desired wants from Robin is too high a price that poor robin will not turn over and accept; Slade knowing that too, and his is both unwilling and unable to lower them or compromise them so that Robin could perhaps widdle past Batman's demands and that of his friends and accept Slade's offer. Oh what a pair they make, they really are the best rivaling and favored couple of opposits out there in the Comic world. I think they are to characters with life energy all their own that is far reaching beyone even the Superman Lex luther conflict, the Batman Ras Al Gule ones. Wonderful chapter, I think you did a great job of writing and convaying the points, you might just want to re read it through and fix some gramatical wrong use of words that are frequent, but that could be fixed and picked up upon with a simple re read through. Later, dlsky
Yumi-wuves-YAOI 2007-06-21 ch 5,	abuseI like it alot. You show such deepth into Robin and Slade, it's amazing. It feels like it is Slade and Robin who are writing this. So keep going! Your writing is so very good!! -Yumi :3
Balance in the Dark 2007-06-20 ch 5,	abuseOk, here's what I got for this story. I think it that Slade's emotions were a little over the top. All the pain he was going through just because he felt intense emotions? I thought that it was a little excessive. Other than that, I love your use of quotes, both from your own earlier work and from the TV shows. I love the dialogue between slade and withergreen and I absolutely love that Robin is having the same effect on Slade as he had on Robin. I love the reversal. All in all, I really liked this chapter. Please don't make us wait so long for the next one. Laterness, BITD
Apprentice08 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abusetHIS STORY IS AWSOME, I will admit i had some troubel fallowign the 1st chapter when slade was thinking and stuff but other then that amazing. I cant wait for the next shot!
steelelf 2007-04-11 ch 3,	abuseYour story is awesome- the plot is great, the style is good, but... some of the typos make it hard to understand. Jester is actually gesture (hand motion, etc?) This story is worth the time- find a beta for it, please! It'd be even better! If you can't get anyone to proof read for you, PM me and I will try to help. Steelelf
courtney brooks 2007-04-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseWOW! That really opened those two up,didn't it?

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