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| C.H.E.A.R. 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuse(I'm Ashley-Rae)This was a great story, I enjoyed reading it so much. It was well written. Keep makeing stories. I'm also a CaRWash fan, so look out there'll be some good fanfics comin' from me. |
| Dr. Addison Montgomery 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseWow this was just beautiful. So well written. You captured the characters and their relationship perfectly. Great work. Vikki x |
| Sara Duquesne 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI luv it! Great job! |
| Rosmarinus 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseOh, so very nice. You captured them -- and what it is like to be afraid and grieving -- so very well. I love the piece about St. Joseph, too -- the grasp at faith and the hint of fear, a mother's desperation and a friend's hope. I love it -- keep writing, I look forward to more by you. |
| Choco.Sushi.Nut 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abusei rele liked this. it was rele moving! i liked how through their (calleigh and ryan) friendship they're able to get through this tough close call.. its incredible about how eric's mother is praying for him.. and yeah.. i liked this.. it was an emotional and amazing ficlet! |
| sugah66 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseOkay, you can't start writing CaRWash fics, too, because now I'm gonna be dying for another one! There are so few decent CaRWash fics out there - I've seriously found, like, two. And I loved this one, because it's CaRWash without being overt. It was tender and heartbreaking, and we know that Calleigh was devastated by what happened to Eric. Beautifully done. |
| Meggles8102 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. If only we could have seen something like this on tv:) |
| Dutchie15 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, this is so good! You did a wonderful job at portraiting not only their feelings, but their actions too felt so real. And it was a very nice effect to have Calleigh tell him about St. Joseph later anyway. This is really good, I hope to read more from you soon. |
| KellyD 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseE. I mean, uh... Ryan/Calleigh. Good stuff. |
| ObessedTWFan 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was gold that she put in his hands, maybe it was just the light or something. Anyways love the fact you wrote a CaRWash fic, I loved it. |
| FanficAddiction 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseTheir hug near the beginning made the little hairs on my arms stand on end. They're so perfect together, it's amazing. Whole different level of intimacy. |