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Shrina
2009-11-25 . chapter 9
usually I don't like stories like this but this was well written and good! I can see where Harry is going in life and am sorry that Lily won't be there for it. Once she finds out that Harry is friends/family with Tom she won't be happy and will make Harry choose between them and the way everything has been happening I can see that Harry will pick Tom because Tom has been a better parent then James and Harry trust him more. It's just sad. By the way, do you know any stories where Lily and Harry turn to Tom? Become dark wizard/witch? I think that would be cool to read about! Anyway great story and are you going to update soon? Its been like two years now!
XD
2009-11-18 . chapter 9
good story harry and tom are soo sweet <3 i love it hope you update soon XD
Flame150
2009-11-09 . chapter 9
No! Why did you stop updating. I have to say that this story is really really good. I hope you update soon for I really like this story so far. ^.^
Reddesquelle
2009-11-08 . chapter 9
Okay, I don't often review (BAD ME) because my typing is painfully slow. But I just had to say that I love this story and I can't wait for an update. (I'm gonna hafta cause I read too fast and noone can type that fast...not a keep an actual plot...take all the time you need...but not too long, please? *puppy eyes*) Thank you for a wonderful story, plot, and believable reforming dark lord.
sheetamoon
2009-11-05 . chapter 9
this is really good I like how you have Harry falling into the dark side at a young age and I like how everyone reacts =3
AKA Quin
2009-10-29 . chapter 9
Wow, this is great! I love it!

I hope you update soon, you wonderful, amazing, fantastic GENIUS of an author!

Seriously, this is great. It is probably one of the few (maybe the only) well-written "Squib-Dark-Harry" stories out there.

Will Harry turn evil? When will his parents find out about his magic?

I have a weakness for torturing scenes. Maybe you could add some of those, as well? That'd be cool. Maybe Voldemort torturing some nameless Muggle because he's angry, or, sometime in the future, Harry torturing someone else... *mwahahahaha*

OK, evil laughter aside, another issue: it is starting to get a little slow, with Harry apparently eternally stuck at six years old. When will he go to Hogwarts? What will Lily and James' reactions be to the letter?

For that matter, is Harry even going to Hogwarts? What house will he be in?

Yeah. So, aside from my astronomically long review, I'd just like to say that I LOVE your story, and I think you are a writing GENIUS. Have you ever thought about writing an orginal story?

Anyway, I hope you get out of your writing rut - at the time of my writing, it has been nearly four years since the last update - and that you update soon!

AKA Quin

PS: Do you need someone to bounce ideas off? A beta? I offer my services, O Great and Mighty Lady Silverwings...
freyame
2009-10-28 . chapter 9
ohh! I love this one! Can you continue please! i love tom& harry interaction
123-321
2009-10-26 . chapter 9
i am sad that is it. nice story
FoxyHottie
2009-10-26 . chapter 9
It's called The Cruciatus Spell, Harry my boy. Doesn't that name itself sound positively wicked?

Thats the best line :D I can just imagine the glowing red eyes and cheeky grin when he said that.
This hasn't been updated in forever! I hope it does again cuz I find it adorable and can't wait for Harry to get to hogwarts with Tommy-boy by his side. :)
kyuubi shadow
2009-10-24 . chapter 9
holy #$*% cruciatous already?!
Katan-kun
2009-10-06 . chapter 9
aw, this was wonderful. I don't think there is a chance of this being continued after two years? A shame, such a lovely story. Now I have to wonder for days how it could have gone on.
MYsweetAngel
2009-09-18 . chapter 9
hi!!
what an amazing! fic!
really really hope u could update someday
I really love this fic!
:)
well see ya soon ...hopefully!
SlyPuff RavenDor
2009-09-15 . chapter 9
This is, quite possibly, the best Harry Potter story I've ever read! Why haven't you updated? Is something wrong? It's been over 2 years...

Please update! :)

-Essa
wigreine
2009-09-11 . chapter 9
I quite like this nice Tom. Update soon!
Kirill
2009-09-10 . chapter 9
А когда продолжение будет?

жуть как интерессно а продолжения нет. :(
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