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StarReader86
2008-06-14 . chapter 8
Your drabbles are very interesting. My personal faves were the Helga/Phoebe, Helga/Olga, Harold/Patty, and Rhonda/Nadine ones. Even though I thought the others were a little depressing, but I understand that you are writing them in a real world kind of sense, which you have nailed.

The Rhonda/Nadine one really touched me, b/c I always wondered how the two kept on being friends even though they were so different and that Rhonda doesn't seem to really value Nadine's friendship. Writing it from Nadine's POV made the complicated relationship between the girls emotionally real. Keep up the good work.
acosta perez jose ramiro
2008-06-13 . chapter 8
Interesting one. A friendship chapter.

Keep the good writing.
Kaydance
2008-06-13 . chapter 8
I love your drabbles/oneshots, and Nadine is one of my favorite minor characters. Nice portrayal of a twist in her friendship with Rhonda. =)
acosta perez jose ramiro
2007-05-29 . chapter 7
Very nice drabbles! I like you giving attention to the minor characters.

Keep the good writing.
Number6
2007-03-10 . chapter 1
Hi there!

I love your work. I don't know so much about genres, but this kind of work is very good and I like it very much.

Jorge Luis Borges, a latin american author, said that the short story was the perfect way to duck the two hundred pages or more that are unnecesary in a novel. I think that the quality of saying more in less words is priceless.

This first drabble, for example, is short and is sweet, condenses all the ideas and feelings of Phoebe and Helga, and perfectly describes the relationship between those unlikely friends.

For that I hope you can make more drabbles, and I must say that I have used more words in this review that you made in your work.

Please make more random drabbles about some other characters of HA!, if you will, I can suggest you Brainy, Ernie or the Jolly Olly Man
Readrbug21
2007-02-24 . chapter 4
Aww, I liked them. Very sweet and to the point. The last one was very sad, and I really enjoyed the one about Helga and Olga.

Please, write more.

-Sami
Hellerick Ferlibay
2007-02-23 . chapter 4
Nice written. Though I'm not sure if I can appreciate this "drabbles" genre. Why you won't try to write a "real" story? I'm sure you can.

I really hope to see LJ community's writings here more often.
acosta perez jose ramiro
2007-02-23 . chapter 4
Very cool fic! Excellent job with all the characters.

Keep the good writing.
Eudial
2007-02-23 . chapter 4
i love this story! very refreshing soo far!! kinda has a very "love actually" type feel with all the different stories going on
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