Hey...that was pretty good. Usually the girls in stories are the 'damsel in distress' types. But Fay seems the 'say that again, i'll fuckin kill you' type. Very nice. Write more, I want to know what happens to her next, how does Vincent know her?

shesh! write on, really good idea for a fanfic, love the characters, can't wait to read another chappie ^^

Chrys

hey! that was really good! and you know what? i'm realyy glad i found it, write more! i think your was the only one i found that was an oc x vincent... and your character is KICK-ASS!!

oh so that's NOT how someone actually spellz mezmorizing. weird. that's what i always thought. wutevur. CONTINUE SOON PLZ! ^_^
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Arenic Story,
but I HATE CLOUDXTIFA in fact i think it's more TIFAXCLOUD! and that couple still sucks huevos it's all about that CLOUDXAEIRTH!
and little miss Faytaliny got a little attidude, funny, reminds me of someone i know

AHAHAHA! Oh YEAH! It is about time somebody came up with some ass kicking character to keep Vincent on a tight leash! I really like this! Yes, you're spelling comes out retarded sometimes, but who cares? OMIGOD! If they ever get together make sure she is the one in control of everything! Make it so that she bosses him around and shit. Well no, you don't have to, but I always thought since he's so bitchy and moody, why not have someone else who is the opposite? Aha, but nah. I like the direction this is heading in. But, please don't move too quick. I hate in fics where the first chapter the people just meet and become friends, then in the next chapter they're already making-out and having sex, n' shit. Get soem bonding time between them. AND MAKE SURE TO SPECIFY WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS TO HER. 'CUZ SHE JUST PASSED OUT IN FRONT OF A EMO SADIST (WHO IS REALLY A PEDOPHILE.)

COME ON! START WRITING! DON"T MAKE ME COME OVER THERE AND MAKE YOU!... I DON"T KNOW WHERE YOUR HOUSE IS BUT I'LL FIND IT IN THE WORLD WIDE YELLOW BOOK! (NO NOT REALLY... GEEZ< STALKER.)

(WHY AM I STILL WRITING IN CAPS?!)

(I DON'T KNOW! WHY AM I ANSWERING MY OWN QUESTIONS?!)

(WHY AM I SCREAMING?!)

BEFORE I GO BUY ANOTHER COMPUTER BECAUSE THIS ONE WILL BE BROKEN IN THE NEXT MINUTE< I WANT TO SAY I LIKE YOUR STORY.)

Peace,
YourBestBuddy... Bitch.